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| Strawberry'd 2008-08-09 ch 1,  | abuseI thought it was amazingly cute! :D I'm happy Len has a temper and can smile XD That quip about his hair being blue (because it really is shockingly blue, and don't get me starting on GREEN) made me giggle rather hard. Loved your fic, keep writing :D! |
| sara 2008-07-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseduh! |
| sara 2008-07-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseyeah pretty much :( |
| RedMapleLeaf 2008-06-11 ch 1, | abusenice |
| ButtonPinCollector 2008-06-05 ch 1, | abuseI absolutely loved the whole thing. |
| keiichi_kawaii 2008-06-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseSUGOI! i like it! |
| AestheticBreezyDoll 2008-06-03 ch 1, | abusenice! :D this goes to my favorites. :) |
| Akaru-chan 2008-05-30 ch 1, | abuseLoved it to death. You're a brilliant author. :] |
| strangelyimmature 2008-05-28 ch 1, | abuseSo, uh, being defeated as a girl means... you have been kissed? :-D That was okay. If you like, you can practice more in writing. Just make a mock-fic and keep editing until you're satisfied |
| danavalkyrie 2008-05-25 ch 1, | abuseAdd all to FAVES... OMG I love how you used the words into meaningful story plots...more pls! |
| gooeycheese 2008-05-20 ch 1, | abuseyay! it's finished! i laugh at the college comment! |
| The Last Vampire 1982 2008-05-20 ch 1, | abuseDon't worry, College didn't make you a bad writer...just maybe make them OOC :) It's really, really GOOD - I liked it a lot ! Are you planning to write more about Len X Kaho and/or write about Kaho X the other guys...especially Tsuchiura ? |
| IceDollSayaka 2008-05-20 ch 1, | abuseThat wasn't dreadful. ^^ I found it funny, especially Kaho and Len's sarcastic comments to each other.. Oh, and the ending was romantic. :D Nice work. :3 |
| Roryth 2008-05-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseSimply charming... Thanks a lot! Roryth |