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| Farrah 2008-09-04 ch 1, anon. | abusenot that i don't think Zachs cute but he doesn't seem strong enough to kill some one maybe he's covering for some one or may be i'm in denial i hope its the first one though Farrah |
| Owl Emporium 2008-05-21 ch 1,  | abuseOh wow, I loved this! Zack has to be back! Maybe in some sort of visiting thing...I don't know, but I really hope he's back! Stupid Gormogon...grr! Angelica |
| standing-in-the-doorway 2008-05-21 ch 1, | abuseLovely fic.No character inconsistencies here...only on the show. WTF!? I don't buy Zack as Gorgomon's apprentice at all! |
| TakeAWhackAtIt 2008-05-20 ch 1, | abuseYes, yes, YES. God, I needed someone to write something that would help this episode make sense in my brain, and you just did it. I can only see Zack doing something like this for something that, to him at least, seemed like a damn good reason. I can see him doing it for the reason you said- wanting to help the whole, wanting to give something back to the people who are, essentially, his family, who have given him a place to belong. Great story. |
| Resurging Crisis 2008-05-20 ch 1, | abuseIt's was a great fic, deep and answered many questions. I can't help but feel sorry for Zack. I feel that it's almost impossible to hate Zack for what he did. |
| BxBforever 2008-05-20 ch 1, | abuseThank you for writing this. i miss Zack. Thanks for bringing him in. you were really really good |
| DobbyRoxMySox 2008-05-20 ch 1, | abuseThis was excellent. Exactly what I would have pictured. I was so sad when I found out Zack was the apprentice, we already thought we were going to lose him once when he went to Iraq, and now this. I love Zack, he's like the little brother in the lab. It's impossible to be mad at him for what he did when he thought he was only trying to help. Thank you so much for writing this, it lifted my spirits significantly. |
| saturn567 2008-05-20 ch 1, | abusesweet and different! |
| Amilyn 2008-05-20 ch 1, | abuseThis was a very nice character study, asking so many of the questions that needed to be asked, having Zack think about the larger details of the situation, letting him know that they knew he meant well, even in doing so wrong. Very nice with Cam and reading the document to him again. Sad, but right. Thank you. |
| Megan Nichole 2008-05-20 ch 1, | abuseVery good, over all. I'm not sure that Cam would have returned so soon, she was really pissed, but I like the idea. Good job. |
| jennisfifi 2008-05-20 ch 1, | abuseThat was really beautiful. For you to pick Cam to be the one to sneak into the hospital to sit with Zack after the truth came to light was appropriate. She was the one with the most visual response to Zach being the apprentice. While she was not alone in her shock and dismay, she did put the words out there for his punishment, knowing in her heart that all is not that simple. I think this was a very good way of showing that Cam has a huge amount of caring in her that she is uncomfortable with, but can't help but show. Great job. |
| space77 2008-05-20 ch 1, | abuseLoved this! I really thought that the scene with Cam reading to Zack was one of the best Cam moments ever... and one of the best-acted moments of the entire finale. But don't even get me started on the rest of it! :-O Great job, especialy for a first Bones fic... write more soon! ~Space |