Wonderful WAFF! I love how you don't screw up Donna and have her go soft on him to comfort him.

Loverly fic.
But there's one problem which you really need to change -it's called 'Clotted Cream' NOT 'Devonshire Cream'. Yes, that is the cream that goes on a Cream Tea (aka. Devon/Devonshire Cream Tea every where outside my home county, because frankly, we Devonshire Dumplings don't see the point in calling it that). But other than that, it was something just right -and Donna was spot on.

Oh my, I liked that. I twas really good.

Wow. That was amazing. I love it! Character was perfect. I loved that one line 'he needed to find stupider companions, really.' hehe...that was brilliant. Keep up the great work!

Oh, that was beautiful. And the Doctor and Donna were just so...them. I think she's good for him, really. (As a friend, of course.)

this story was wonderful in so many ways, i could see it following on from the tv ep seemlessly, you had Donna's personality and speach down to the grown, and the doctor too for that matter,and was just plain brill, a great peace of work :)

Very good! I really enjoyed reading this. The emotions were spot on :-)

Tinnie