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Orange-y27 9/21/10 . chapter 1
your grammar can improve, i noticed a lot of corrections while reading.

over all- your story is great.

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please read my stories! anyone?
Yume Li 2/27/10 . chapter 12
So, who will Tsuna ended up with eventually? I hope it's either with Hibari or with both Hibari and Mukuro.
bookimp 2/22/10 . chapter 12
I like this story and am enjoying reading it, there went my morning. I think you've done well keeping them in character, the story plausible, and I look forward to more chapters :)
usagi018 2/15/10 . chapter 12
I am so for 1827! though I don't want Mukuro to be left out! hehe this is soo cute! I love the triangle! Will Hibari realize his feelings for Tsuna? Please continue this! bye!
Nemii 1/13/10 . chapter 12
PLEASE make it 182769.
me 11/11/09 . chapter 7
your story is so nice but you really need to find a beta reader to correct your grammars. ok?
racooncity 11/2/09 . chapter 12
jealousy is great for 1827.

yay the ending has an 1827 alert! XD Piggyback! I love it SO much. Thank goodness it's gonna be an 1827 concentrated fic, I love it more. Nice story, but you can fix some grammars there. Did you learn some English words by ear? Because my friends do, and they have the same mistakes like yours. No offense, just asking :D maybe I can help sometime for the words.

Going to wait for your next chapt!
bonbonpich 10/6/09 . chapter 5
nice story! i like how you kept each of them in their dialogue. oh, just noticed that you're thai. it's not everyday that i found my nationality here on . maybe that's just me, bleh :P anyways, do continue with your fic!
Jikage 9/27/09 . chapter 12
UWAH! *fangasm*

YAY! More Hibari-alone time! :D
Jikage 9/27/09 . chapter 10
MY GOD! Wow! I really LOVED the kitchen scene! Go 1827! I voted for Hibari in your poll. :D
Jikage 9/27/09 . chapter 8
I saw your fanart, I LOVED it. Sakura Addiction always did make me think they're singing to Tsuna. :D
Jikage 9/27/09 . chapter 7
Yay! Hibari-alone time! :D
Jikage 9/26/09 . chapter 6
JEALOUS? :D

I love jealously. Especially how you write yours. I think I'm falling in love with your story. It's really good. Sure, there are some typos, but the plot is way more than enough to keep me here. :D
Jikage 9/26/09 . chapter 5
Sweetie, you can NEVER do too much Hibari POV. xD

Interesting, so Gokudera and Yamamoto have been in a sorta-relationship before they came to Italy...I wonder how Tsuna will react when he finds out.
Jikage 9/26/09 . chapter 3
The three of them meet! :D Hibari fixed Tsuna's tie. Heehee. :D
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