Your explanation of the betrayal is reasonable, for both of them seem lot insecure to me.

A moving fic, to sum it up.

oh i am crying when i read this, so sad poor ami and xoi but ur story is good, i dont like angsty story but this one is different

Wow, a very good story here. Like your style of writing. Anyway great work!

That was a really sad story, and I did cry :p Well, tearing up. It was very moving. Write more! :)

I was on the verge of tears...you almost succeeded in makng me cry...oh boy, this fic was great! Wow!

Awesome story! Absolutely one of the better Ami/Zoi stories that I've read to date. Your writing was both clear and logical during the progression of the plot. No grammitical or spelling errors were obvious. You gave a believable reason for Zoi's betrayal and carried through admirably. One could only hope that you would write a sequal to this with a more "happy" ending to it.

Do keep up the good work!

OH GOD, YOU MADE ME CRY IN THE PUBLIC LIBRARY. KEEP WRITING!

Not just one tissue, give me the whole dang box! WaaaAAAaaa! It was pretty. I liked it very much. Please write another one...I'll be in the back, soaking up my tears...

Wow. That was REALLY good! Awww tear! Haha that was so sad! You should do one for all of the inner senshi!

That's HORRIBLE! I know they died anyway, but I still don't like it when it happens.

J

That was beautiful. I love Ami/Zoiiste fics, and this one was just beautiful.

Hey, that was great! I'm reviewing like you asked at the MB, but besides that, this was a review-worthy piece. So introspective, so emotional, so heartfelt...One hundred thumbs up, Kaze-chan! _

oops. forgot to add the names of my dear, awesome editors. go ICE and YOSH!

I don't cry easily or almost at all at fics, but I think I felt some pricking going on there. Is this going to be a four-part thing covering each of the Generals? Let's see, if you're going by planetary order of the girls, next up is Kunzite. I'll be looking forward to it!

This was very sad and sweet... *sniffles* I'm not particularly a fan of Zoisite and Ami, but this fic was very well done... the emotion was portrayed very well. Overall, a good story.