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Sinister Attraction
2008-10-01
ch 1,
abuse... Again you simply amaze me!! I absolutely LOVE this story too!!
geekischic
2008-09-20
ch 1,
abuseHOLY @$?*! That was SO HOT! I need a cold shower after that one. Fantastic job!!
BonesDBchippie
2008-09-11
ch 1,
abusemia~
OH DEAR GAWD woman!! This was absolutely brilliantly frick'n HOT! and I've no idea how I missed it!! It's got a wonderful collage of emotions and you played every one of them out BEAUTIFULLY!! Humor! Romance! A touch of Angst! And Oh yeah, some lovely M'ness!! I REALLY enjoyed the first person writing! And a sexually frustrated Booth is hysterical too! Gawd, I lov'd when he asked her "This is what you want?...Tell me, Temperance. I need to hear you say it.” MERCY that was HOT! Well, that among other things too!! EXCELLENT fic dear!

~G :D
Amanda
2008-08-22
ch 1, anon.
abuseIt was amazing. Despite the Adult content you captured Booths persona perfectly. Well done.
quelea
2008-08-18
ch 1, anon.
abusemy god. that is one of the sexiest fan ficts I've ever read. I love it.
jamin-lilly-bailey
2008-07-01
ch 1,
abuseoh me like u have a amazingly dirty mind but i reckon it would be better if u could her bones thoughts 2 :P
Bailadora
2008-06-24
ch 1,
abuseThat was HOT!
You write pissed off, horny Booth very well! C:
evilninjakittens
2008-06-18
ch 1,
abuseWhat's with all the cursing? It's slightly OOC for him, just because there's so much of it. An occasional swear is normal, but the beginning of this was just too much. Other than that, it was well written.
daisydol
2008-06-05
ch 1,
abuseWow, that was really great! I laughed out loud in parts at the beginning of the story. I particularly liked the word "chickenshitedness". The first person was really great, it took a bit of getting used to at first, but you had such a good grasp of Booth's voice that I completley forgot it was in first person. It flowed very naturally. Great job.
animeLCgrl
2008-06-04
ch 1,
abuseYou should continue writing forever!
kinseyjo
2008-06-01
ch 1,
abuse*is burning down your house and does not see you walk up*

Oh hai! don't mind me. just burning down your house. :) FREAKING A, YO. I just. WORDS FAIL ME, MIA. And that does NOT HAPPEN. WORDS DO NOT EVER FAIL ME.

If there is, dreamland is horseshit, because apparently I’m not even allowed such things in my unconscious state. I must have really pissed someone off up there. Maybe it’s all the cursing. *perhaps, seeley, my love. perhaps. but we wouldn't have you any other way!*

I think of all those undeserving bastards who’ve had her naked, been between her legs, and I’m even more annoyed. *i love how he's just plain ol' irritated.*

I realize that being inside her feels just like knowing her all these years does, like loving her does. *simply beautiful!*
dannightshade
2008-06-01
ch 1,
abuseShould you write first person again? Hell Yes! that was honestly so very very good. i loved how you wrote it from both points of view, that was totally sexy! Fantastic story! *coughs *off for a could shower *coughs again*
mkdice
2008-05-31
ch 1,
abuseLOVE IT! KEEP WRITING. I WILL KEEP READING.
Fruitlooped
2008-05-31
ch 1,
abuseAwesome! More please.
inzaghina
2008-05-28
ch 1,
abuseYou did great, I think writing in first person is very hard and you managed to sound like a man, just like Booth would feel.
Great FF, I'm probably in the need of a cold shower now..
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