great story, keep it up!

this is an awesome story. i like it so far. please add more.

I think this is a wonderful piece of writing! You should most definitely continue it! I like it a lot! :)

You are forming a really good history, please continue!

Could you please update soon. I would like to read more. This is really interesting.

Had a thought and got lost,
Lady Lost-A-Lot

to be continued? when? where? I HAVE TO READ IT!

She felt a confusion she normally associated with algebra

I love that line. I think it sums up myself and boys (and algebra).

But the story is so fascenating and fresh. I'm really glad you wrote it.

Creepy... just plain creepy. In a delightful sort of way.

Ha ha! Very nice work.I love finding a good plot. Look forward to reading this story.

ithis move is so good.

Please continue! Please please please please!

very well-written and well-developed! Brilliant!! You must continue this!

Please write more...i really like this story. good job:)

aMAZING, SUPER AMAZING.I LOVE THIS STORY! IT'S REALLY GOT A GREAT PLOT AND THE WAY YOU WRITE MAKES THINGS SEEM VERY REAL. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Please continue, this is brilliant!