All I can think to say upon finding this is...PURE BRILLIANCE!

Oh, this is really good! I can't wait to find out what happens next, but you haven't updated in a while. I hope you do, so I've put this story on alert just in case. I really do like this story, so please, if you read this review, update soon!

Interesting story. Nicely written as well.

Continue this, please:)

Best wishes!

very good story. looks promising. can't wait for more. please update

Please update! Even though it has been 2 years... Hey, VODT just came out, that ought to inspire you!

Really? REALLY? You had to stop there? AND THEN NOT UPDATE FOR TWO YEARS? This angers me.

Please... PLEASE UPDATE.

Oh my gosh! You MUST continue this! I saw that the date hasn't been updated in a long while but please continue if you can! PPPPLLLEEAAASSEEE! It was just awsome!

great story, keep it up!

this is an awesome story. i like it so far. please add more.

I think this is a wonderful piece of writing! You should most definitely continue it! I like it a lot! :)

You are forming a really good history, please continue!

Could you please update soon. I would like to read more. This is really interesting.

Had a thought and got lost,

Lady Lost-A-Lot

to be continued? when? where? I HAVE TO READ IT!

She felt a confusion she normally associated with algebra

I love that line. I think it sums up myself and boys (and algebra).

But the story is so fascenating and fresh. I'm really glad you wrote it.

Creepy... just plain creepy. In a delightful sort of way.