interesting. . . .i am hoping that a up date is near at hand. . PLEASE update!

Wow. I really really like how you have written this story. This is very interesting story idea you have come up with and I can't wait to see how it will progress.

I'm in agreement with am225! I NEED to know what happens next! This is such an excellent story! It needs closure!

For a very short story, this one draws you in quickly. I would love to see it expanded on. I am currently working through all your writing, so maybe you have and I just haven't read it, yet.

Hey what happened to this story?! It needs an update!

Wow - this is so good it is driving me insane - I love it, please add more - don't forget about your lost children...these stories need closure...

I can't wait until you get Karigan, Fastion, and Zachary all in the same room. At this point, I'm rooting for Fastion. :)

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This has got to be the best GR fanfic ever. Oh, please update soon! I'm dying to see how this all pans out!

Yay an update! Great chapter Lady! can't wait for another update.

sigh..such love and passion i want more!!

yay! you updated.

update again. and update the other one too.

dude

if I were fastion, I'd like, freaking kidnap Karigan XDXD this is wonderful still, so bravo, my friend!

Thank you so much for updating! I loved the work, no critiques. However, I hope Karigan doesn't have to do her duty in this...she is a lady governor after all and wouldn't that mean the other nobles would take offense at the king actions against one of thier own?

Gemini

Hehehehe... go, Fastion. Also, I've said it before and I'll say it again, Estora needs a clue-by-four to the head to remind her that this is not a decent thing to do... as if Karigan hasn't already done her duty to Sacoridia, hasn't continued to do her duty to Sacoridia. Okay, Estora's ticking me off, but you knew that already. I'm all for more K/F goodness.

Sirius

this is just as wonderfull as the others i want more!!