Love this. I love the way you make Charlie find out-although I think he would be happier ignorant of the truth.

very cute and sweet.. It's hard to find quality Edward and Bella stories that are true to chracter these days

I don't think I've seen a story quite like this but I enjoyed it thoroughly though I was surprised by Charlie's quick acceptance, but I guess he wants Bella to be happy...

Loved it! :)
great story

That was brilliant!

I loved it!

good job. I liked how you've wrapped things up; I too thought that perhaps poor Char. I think Charlie's just a big softie. Check out my story Getting to Know the Cullen Coven. Similar concept, post BD. I'm told it's hilarious:)

aw

Great. REALLY great. I have to admit, I was thinking Chalie would shoot Eddie boy for a second. Loved how it turned out. Bravo

LOVED IT!

woah. that was actually really good. ive read other "what if they found out" stories, but this is by far the best.

Tears are in my eyes from the ending...I love how you wrote this, and I know there are other CHARLIE FINDS OUT fics, but this is the first good one. It's so depressing, but it's very good.

WRITE ON!

Seriously, write on.

May the Forks be with you,
Trouble (But call me Creature)

Here's something that may make you laugh:

(After hearing fire trucks in the background)
"Helen, did you catch on fire again?"

(Shocked silence)

That happened yesterday...me and my buddy cracked up for about five minutes straight.

Same thing happened with bread.

My dog ate my sandwich and I curled up into a ball and laughed for about ten minutes, weakly murmering "Bread" the whole time.

It was really well written! I hope Breaking Dawn will be like that!! =)

That was so amewsome! :)

AW! I love this! This is so sweet...hehe, I would like to see her mom and step-dad's reaction.

Omg, I can't believe this story has only 19 reviews. It is so good! I absolutely loved it; especially Charlie's acceptance. A couple of times you used the word "feint" where it should have been "faint", but otherwise it was completely excellent. My favorite Twilight fic so far.