Awwww...Adorable.

I loved it. :*) And the ending? I started cracking up. Just fantastic. XD

awww, thats awesome, _ a nice alternate ending to the season

I really, really, Really love how this ends. "for the sum of 25, no chores for three weeks and two bags of M&Ms" Perfect.

Wow! Pretty cool DD

The fight in hell was just amazing. And the ending was just cute

I really liked it

See ya next, then o/

Rosetta

OMG that was awesome. The ending was great Dean selling his soul to Sam for M&M's I can so see that happening. Loved it.

Alright, so this was, how should we say? Awesome. Yup, awesome is in fact THE word. The description of the first tunnel of Hell was great, definitely un-Hell like as addressed, but blood sliding up from the floor endlessly is a tauntingly scary image that hilariously didn't phase Sam too heavily.

"I know who I am without Dean. I can't..." Loved this line, really captures the psyche of someone embracing a last, desperate measure of a plan.

The arguing between Sam and the Judge was great. Gotta love the Judge of Hell accusing Sam of "splitting hairs". The fight scene that followed was well written from the ax manifesting, Sam's realization of his dark laugh, and his tormented thoughts of the animal he's become. I'm a huge Dark Sam fan, so I'm clearly a piece of this work as it makes it all appear as Pre-Dark Sam. Of course, he doesn't turn into Boy King here, but it's still all very good stuff.

My favorite part (along with the closing lines) would be when the Judge deceives Sam, only allowing the contest to allow to show Sam his potential. To allow him a sliver of what he could be if he only just gave into the blood dripped into him.

The Dean-in-Hell moments were well written, to be simply put, but I love how Dean sold out to chocolate, being chore-free for three weeks, and $25. Lol, at that time Sam may have been the one who got suckered, but it all panned out, right? Awesome, awesome, piece.

I love this ending! Very original. Great job!

OMG Bud, this was one of the most powerful, beautiful stories I have ever read. I wish WISH WISH this had happened on the show! Sam going into to hell to fetch Dean, fighting the furies, and all the hurt!comfort! The angst and worry was so intense, I was sitting on the edge of my seat. My hand was holding Dean's, along with Sammy's, you pulled me so completely into this story! This is definitely one of my all time fav stories ever!

And then you finish off with the most precious thing of all ... Dean sold his soul to Sammy LOL XD - brilliant!

Huggles and luv

Mish :D x

Awesome! That's definitely the most original twist ever! Totally loved it

Huggels, TD

If this had been the real ending of season three, it would have been perfect. ]

Loved it.

That was so cute at the end.

That. Was. Brilliant. I adored the ending - go figure that those little childhood things we write come back to have some value, right?

Your Sam is awesome! Honestly, the whole story had a very serious feel all the way up to the Judge and Dean's rescue - but then you pulled out the letter. The M&Ms were a very nice touch. :D Good job!

I do hope that's how the season premiere goes...they should just use this as a script...but seriously, awesome! :)

A joking letter like that actually held worth? Good for Dean that it did. Go Sam!