Ha Ha! Go Yukina!

FINNALY! It's about time somebody gave Yukina a say in the matter.
THANK YOU!

oh, and it was a great story too.!

absolutely necessary! ha! i knew yukina was not as innocent or naive as they make her out to be. great work! and kawaii... for Kurama and Hiei. lol. go at like rabbits, do they? awesome!

:-)

True, Yukina is somewhat more powerful then she lets on, but if she was that strong, she would not have been kidnapped!. Oh well, I liked it, maybe she was ooc, but still pretty interesting. I've never seen Yukina like that, it was pretty awesome. But that seems more like Suzuru's attitude, or even Atsuko's.

I can't believe I didn't think to look at who wrote this before reading this! I finished reading, and went to check something, and with a shock I see "Written by Anna Jaganshi" and did a double-take. Note to self - read pen-names before reading...

I feel bad for Yukina, for lack of better term. I think at some point I would snap and shout some curse words, make Kuwabara eat the dirt (lol) and yell at Hiei for being so stupid sometimes. I laughed at the "slam-bam-thank=you-ma'am" part.

Yukina seems the perceptive type, and so does Kurama. Hiei does a bit too...but he seems slow. Their personalities are very nicely portayed here. And the KuramaHiei bit was nice too (oh gosh, I've become a fangirl! Oh wait - I think I've been one...).

Agreeing to a point about your statement about Yukina being a naive twit - she is almost that in the actual manga/anime too, to my annoyance - and Kuwabara saping over ALL THE TIME gets on my nerves to the sun and back.

Love the last statement. Sarcastic humor, lol.

I loved it! And I beg you to keep the story going. I've always thought she stronger then she seemed. The only thing harder then finding a story about Yukina being strong is one well written. I look forward to more of your writting.