Lovely!

Aw, nice ending. I say the same as I have already in all the other chapters. It was agreat well rounded story and well done for finishing it, I was kind of afraif it would turn out that you'd given up halfway through.

My only pedantic little comment here is Sophie is 18, not 17. That's VERY trivial, feel free to ignore it. My main objection was with the silver hair thing because that was my least favourite thing about the movie- almost- and starlight is NOT a colour.

Xanthe

It's all very entertaining and origional and I'm still enjoying it as much as ever.

My one critisism now is that she's growing very slowly comparitivly. It always amazes me how fast children develop so I havew no doubt I would ahve a similar problem if writing this but four-year-olds usually have quite a wide volcabulary actually and my cousin Elisha was walking and talking with relative ease when she was just 2.

This was written ages ago so if I'm going to review it at all it ought to be once I've read the whole thing but I write pretty long reviews so if I just write several short ones that ought to make it easier for me to remmember everything I have to say.

I love stories based on the novel becuase the book is fantastic but I don't know how well you know it at this point because there are some fairly major mistakes.

Your style of writing and general plot is great, it's a really fun idea and I'm looking forward to seeing how you deal with it but being a pedant there are things I can't let slip:

Sophie's hair is red-gold and long but you've put silver and shoulder-lengh, had you not quite finished reading the book or something but either way, you get the point.

Watch out for the charectorisation on Calcifer, its something that often slips with people who saw the movie first.

I know this seems trivial and annoying but I'm a trivial and annoying person. I'm enjoying it in any case.

Cal is kind of mean in chapter 6. but still funny and cute. Its a good story. I hate that howl's picking up girls! He has Sophie the perv! One day he decides that she can't kiss him so he looks for another! Hes a PEVERT! Still love the story!

The plot completely enraptured me. Very well written, and quite hilarious. I loved how both Michael and Howl panicked over who would have to take care of her next. Please keep up the good work, and I would love to know what else you write!

I love it!

amzaing!keep writing please!

That was very cute , poor boys rising a child, lol.

aw, i love it! poor howl and Michael. lol

the end was ok but i liked it better if it was longer and had more drama lol

That was cute. I'm sad it's over, but it was a good story.

Aw! It's over! I really loved it!

aww thays so cute!

lol, the parts where they are taking care of the lil sophie was funny, 3