Very much curious about the mystery you're spinning here. A very fun, charming read, and I really can't wait to see how things happen when Kisuke and Harry meet.

Oh man, I was so disapointed when I saw there were no more chapters... I'm loving this story so I really hope you haven't given up on it.

Well I have to say that this is one of the more original crossover ideas (that actually work) that I've read on this site. I also really enjoy how you've been keeping everyone very in character they're really close to what you see and read about especially Harry in this.

I missed the author's note at first but going back thankfully I found it so I know about the timeline now. I'm kind of interested to see just what happened when these people keep up with each other now. I can't wait to see what you come up with next and you can expect me to stick with the story as well.

Not too shabby. Not too shabby at all. I'll keep an eye on this one. :)

Hey! This is very well done, and I like how you've predated it to pre-show events.

Also, you've got Urahara bang to rights. :D

um, this fic is nice, but its painful slow so far, okay i'm probaly exagerating there, but seriosly, at least let them meet already!

I LOVE IT! FINALY a bleach Dresden Fanfic. Both Bleach and Dresden are awesome! and You have put the together so well. i can't wait and am ding to see more. ^__^

Very interesting. I like where this is going. You spelled ventas servitas wrong though btw, just thought I'd mention that. Keep up the good work.

Oh, wow... where to start?

Okay, let's start with the edits you made: Awesome! They were only little things, but those little things perfected the chapter. Not a single spelling, grammar or structure critique to make on it. It makes me incredibly happy that you DO care about the presentation of this fic. It really shows and it makes reading it even more enjoyable than it already is.

Now, since that technical bit is out of the way... time to rub in how incredibly clever you are! Seriously, if it were anyone but you to write this sort of crossover I don't think it would have worked. You have such and amazing talent for taking ideas that are so outside the box and making them work that I do feel envious. It's fantastically creative and it's done EXACTLY as it should be! Bravo, my darling.

Characterization, everyone is on point. Harry's suitably edgy yet human, Kisuke is adorable and shrewd, Yoruichi is tough without being callouse... Have I told you yet that you've got Kisuke nailed PERFECTLY? Those genius type characters can be so hard to write sometimes, but you've got him down like you've plopped a cot inside his head and made your home there! Again, a little green monster is coming out on my end.

Story wise... Freakin' awesome! Harry's thoughts later about his first run in with a Hollow should be interesting. Yoruichi and Kisuke in Chicago also promises some fun. PLEASE have Kisuke make them stop for deep dish pizza! *grins* A silly request, but I could so see that happening.

Anyway, can't wait for more. Must get coffee now. And go to work. Ew.

Man, this is awesome. I'm especially impressed by how well you're evoking Dresden - he sounds right on the bat. I can't wait to see what heppens next!

Ooh, this is really well writen. Very close to Jim Butcher's style, but not in first person. Continue please :)

I started reading expecting a trainwreck, but this is actually very good! o.o 'Till now, the conection between fandom's been pretty smooth, and even if it isn't in first person, the Dresden bits have the right 'feeling'.

I look forward to the next chapter.

Nice chapter, when comes the next one?

Nice! As with the first chapter, the way you're very cleverly weaving the two worlds together is just brilliant. I can honestly say this has GOT to be the best crossover fic I've read in a long time. What makes it truly great is that you've taken two COMPLETELY different universes and somehow made them work in a way that makes perfect sense.

Two things I love? Crack pairings/crossovers... and crack/parings/crossovers that are believable. Congratulations, you've made me a VERY happy reviewer.

I did notice the little change you made to the end regarding the informant. *nods approvingly* Two quote Nerima Daikon Brothers: Two thumbs UP! It's less blatantly, "Gee. What a coincidence. I cannot believe I bumped into you," and more, "Well, well... isn't THIS a coincidence." Also, no grammar or spelling errors that I noticed, so good on ya for that.

Please keep it going. This is quite a fun ride!

You... are such win. Seriously. This is perhaps the most clever crossover I've ever had the pleasure of experiencing. It seems like complete crack and definitely FTW?! in the summary... but it's not upon reading. What I love more than the fact that everyone is flawlessly in character is that IT MAKES PERFECT FREAKIN SENSE! That is beyond amazing.

To anyone freaking out over this crossover... read it first. This is incredibly clever and well thought out. Definitely worthy of as much praise as can be heaped upon it.