Honey, you speak the language of the people with overactive brains... and terminal depression.
If you want to continue writing this well, never take your frickin meds, okay?
;-)
-}-@
Krys

Excellent! :) It was like watching an episode of IMAN. Thanks! LadyBaller

Okay, on the strength of this one, I went and read most (all?) of the rest of your Iman postings. You have obviously experienced severe depression, and understand both the emotional pain involved and the sort of effects it has not only on the person experiencing the depression, but those around them. Your prose are poignanat and quite moving, and in the stoy in which you theorize Darien's addiction to the knife-edge of madness, speaks to an understanding of addiction in general. Good for you, an impressive talent, yours, to be able to convey such emotion-fraught topics with as much force and eloquence as you do. Look forward to more angst for the Iman...

Okay, on the strength of this one, I went and read most (all?) of the rest of your Iman postings. You have obviously experienced severe depression, and understand both the emotional pain involved and the sort of effects it has not only on the person experiencing the depression, but those around them. Your prose are poignanat and quite moving, and in the stoy in which you theorize Darien's addiction to the knife-edge of madness, speaks to an understanding of addiction in general. Good for you, an impressive talent, yours, to be able to convey such emotion-fraught topics with as much force and eloquence as you do. Look forward to more angst for the Iman...

This was really good. The imagery was great and I particularly liked the part about the pajamas & the invisibility making D feel like a kid. Just a lovely, subtle character study.

Wonderful! Powerful imagery, the car crash and the silence afterwards, vividly described, almost forgotten and then returned to in the end. I've had nights like that, so tired every movement stands out yet it all blurs together. Too tired to sleep. You captured it perfectly. And I can so see the disconnected state of mind being the only invisible man would bring; another vivid image! Is this a stand-alone? Because now I'm curious whether this headache is because he's almost due for a shot, or whether Darien is now prone to stress/tension migraines, too. Either way, it's a lot for him to go through. Very well done!

Hoor baby. He need to have Bobby come over and pat his forehead, maybe give him a neck rub, something! you're not going to leave him ike this, are you?

Great fic! You really know the characters well hope you keep writing more ,

you really crawled into his head, great fic!

Whoa... There's a reason you're on my favorites list, girl. ;) This is great. Keep up the good work, okay? Please? I'd like to see you get into the character's heads more often, you do it so well.

Excellent fic! Now that you have my attention, you must continue with it.

I'm looking forward to more.

Wonderful characteriztion. You're incredibly honest in how you do his P.O.V. VERY believable. Liked it alot. Write more please!

I liked it a lot! Great P.O.V.!

I liked this a lot! You write Darien really well. Can't wait to read more from ya. :)