[ late review, yes yes, I know ]

Cute.
Sweet.
True.
Continue please?

Aww. That was sweet! And really sad. I like the fact it's the first in a series. I've no doubt they'll get better.

x0x0 Raven

T_T This is so sweet!
I'll wait for the ones to come...
T__T Matt is so... awesome...

xD

Aww!! ;__; How sad and beautiful at the same time!!

D'aww. :3 That's intensely cute. I found this on LJ, and I agree! Second person for the win! It's really making a comeback, actually, I'm seeing more and more of it. o_o

"And you love him more with every tobacco-ridden breath you take." GAH. I love that line. Srsly. I don't know why, but it sounds so darn pretty.

I also like how you describe their relationship, even if it is so short. XD Poor Matty, he's kind of like an attention-starved puppy.

I really liked it and can't wait to read more!