More chapters!
More chapters!
This is at a really good start!
keep going!

cool... Cira..
huh..
nice...
that's very sweet..
^^
cool.
update soon please!

...something tells me you stole my name on purpose..XD lol jk

Aw..
so kawaii..
Interesting!!
HA!! L's right!
UPDATE son!

Hehe, (you reminded me I wanted to review this) I'm interested to see where this goes. & being 'over-used' or 'clichéd' doesn't really matter. As long as you give it a little of your own spice that sets it off from the others. & as long as your girls keep the story rolling - you should be alright. Nina & Cira seem like they can pull it off. One totally shy (yet has the backbone to protect the little one) & the other adorably cute (Cuteness always snags me)!

I love Cira! She's so sweet! Great story!

i like the start of your death note story :) hope you continue to write it
sincerly
bellaxmonster

Great beginning. This fic could really go places! Good luck with your story!

Awsome! totally beautiful, please update soon.

good start of a story, you'll have to work on your grammar for a bit but that's just because I saw some mistakes. great story though, I'm curious on how this will turn out!

i am interested to see where this will go. post more please.

Whrere have I read this before (shifty eyes) DOUGH I CAN'T REMEMBER! DIDN'T YOU SHOW ME THIS AT SCHOOL! Gr I still can't remember ooh well I have my D Gray Man story updated give it a look and log in I wish to talk/write