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Azolean
2009-10-14 . chapter 5
Please tell me you're planning a follow-up for this one. I loved this story. It was a great idea. But it leaves me wondering, you know?

I agree that a follow-up with McKay and Betty would be interesting. But what about the poor City? It's not its fault it was programmed that way. I know, it sounds pathetic, but I was rooting for the City by the end of it. lol

Yeah, they need to go back for a visit sometime. The possibilities here are so, so wide open.

Thank you so much for the time and effort you put into the creation of this fic. I'm looking forward to finding a follow-up and I continue on through your newer stuff.
Lilimayhem
2009-06-02 . chapter 5
Good one. I almost want a sequel with Betty and Rodney!
Whirlwind421
2009-04-22 . chapter 5
Awesome story!! I love little Betty/O14! And Ronon got his blaster back! There is peace in the world! Yay!!
Jinxauthor Mel
2009-03-20 . chapter 5
Getting out of trouble by causing *more* trouble for whoever or whatever put them *into* trouble, seems to have become the modus operandi for SG teams in any galaxy, but starting a full out revolution has to be a new one for Rodney. Quite fun to read, though something like that is actually more Sheppard's style. ^.~

When Teyla heard Rodney and John 'squabbling' at the end, I could so see Rodney putting on a puppy dog look and going, "Can I keep it?" So, are all the even numbered bots 'female'? I guess that would explain the kind of tasks City had ascribed to them, and therefore why they hated their superior more than the others. *g* I get the feeling Betty will fit right in with Atlantis.
Oh, why did it have to be a 'B' name? Or were those just natural alliterations because he started off with 'Buster'?
Blueninja33
2008-12-09 . chapter 5
Hooray for Betty!!
Valexie
2008-05-30 . chapter 5
Fantastic. Wonderful finale. Loved the story from beginning to end. Would love a sequel or continuing saga revolving around Rodney and his peeping robot. Of course a guest appearance by City could make things interesting.
Valexie
2008-05-30 . chapter 4
When good robots go bad. Quite the image...chaos, war of the robots, I'm feeling sorry for the little critters. And I can't help it, I feel sorry for City too. But that doesn't mean I don't want John and Rodney to escape. Enjoying the rescue attempt by Ronon and Teyla, you can never have enough C4.
Valexie
2008-05-30 . chapter 3
Nice chapter. I keep picturing the skutter as "1812" from "Farscape". Love the interaction between City, Rodney, John and the skutter. As for Teyla and Ronon, haven't they heard the old addage, "trouble comes in threes?"
tazmy
2008-05-28 . chapter 4
oh, this is so creative and fun :) I like the little robots attacking the city because Rodney convinced them they didn't have to obey. Very nice.
tazmy
2008-05-26 . chapter 1
o nice start. I'll have to read more tomorrow.
sablecain
2008-05-26 . chapter 5
Yay! Happy Explody ending! Almost feel sorry for the poor city and yet...not too much. Lovely story. I enjoyed it very much and look forward to the NEXT one! hee.
mandy
2008-05-25 . chapter 5
Great story, as per usual. Loved the mini-bots. Viva la revolucion!
Space1Traveler
2008-05-24 . chapter 5
Naughty City was so sad. :( The little beastie! Can you turn a city over your knee for a good spanking? LOL

Thanks, this was very good. Thanks for sharing.
ayumidah
2008-05-24 . chapter 5
aw! I loved McKay's relationship with the robots-- 014 was too cute :D Great fic
krysalys
2008-05-24 . chapter 5
*snicker*
Great story, hon. And a short one this time!
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