Update PLEASE! It's so original, this is how the story should have gone! So, UPDATE!! THIS STORY IS GENIUS!!

S.V

Please write more! It's really good so far, and I like the idea of this. It would've been interesting for it to have been the *real* storyline for Death Note.

And maybe some Mello/Matt later~! Yay!

Oh yeah.
I remember this now.
But yus, babe.
You should definitely continue on this.
It's a good idea, y'know?

Yes, this is how Death Note should have gone. It would've made a really, really interesting storyline. 5 stars and I hope that gives you the incentive to finish.