 Ashimattack 4/14/10 . chapter 1what?
how did you manage to put so much into so little words?
love it.. |
 Kamaete 4/6/10 . chapter 1under 200 words and still a favorite.
Hi.
Grey skies are often the most beautiful but I can't stand to look at them...
I don't know why but maybe you do?
Bye. |
 Rewind.Replay.Repeat 12/2/08 . chapter 1Not sure who's talking at what time.
I loved it either way. Not many authors actually put a lot of emphasis on what Naruto and Sasuke say. More than most of the time it's what they do... |
 Tainted Griffin 5/28/08 . chapter 1i liked it. it says a lot. good job. |
 Hakudoushikawaiine 5/22/08 . chapter 1 Oh okay, I'm sorry for the accusion then. I thought it was weird concidering the fact that it was you (I've read your stories before and I think you're a really good writer that's why I was really surprised) but now I get it. Sorry once again and thank you for not flaming me about it.
Anywho then you'll get a better review this time;
I like it very much. It was sort of poetic and I could totally see Naruto and Sasuke having the same conversation in the real show.
All in all, it was a nice capture of a scene.
Nice work. |
 Hakudoushi kawaii ne 5/20/08 . chapter 1Uuhh, I have read the exact same dialogue somewhere else... o_O; |