 Blackmoondragon1415 2008-12-22 . chapter 2O.O
What's gonna happen to Manny?
You can't just leave this hanging, it's too good an idea!
Please update |
 Goddess on a Highway 2008-10-10 . chapter 2Very original! Keep writing, it's a great story so far. |
 Dubblez L6 2008-06-24 . chapter 2omg, whus happening? |
 hc327 2008-06-04 . chapter 2Great story idea. :) I can't wait to see what happens next. *wonders what time period manny's in* |
 Morag I 2008-05-26 . chapter 2Well, now he's awake (thank you...funny...wires?), they obviously put him behind an electric fense (I've slammed into those a few times myself. Not plesent) and *snicker* tranquilized him. I'm not so sure why I find that last part humerous. Maybe it's because I know how woozy he'll be when he wakes up. (If you asked the guy any sort of question while he's still drunk with that stuff, he'd probably answer in a rather slurred tone. Quite hysterical indeed.)
Oh, and remember to use the good ol' thesaurus. You're writing is wonderful, but with a some more variaty to the words, it would be ROCK ON!
Loven' it!
Signed,
Morag I |
 Morag I 2008-05-23 . chapter 1MANNY! AAHRRG! NOT GOOD!
Well, actually, very good. The writing is wonderfull! Your description is awsome! (and I think that the screaming light brown blur was Sid)
And you said that he was to be "awakened artifically". I'm really curious as to what that will mean exactly.
Update this one! You must! I'm dying with curiocity here!
Signed,
Morag I |
 goldenpuon 2008-05-22 . chapter 1Cool story! Can't wait to see if you put some Ice Age 3 stuff in it. I read Cendric or something in the summary. Don't know who that is but can't wait to find out. XD Maybe you can actually put some info about Ice Age 3 that is true, not the stuff I keep finding on wikipedia that keeps changing. Keep it up! XD |