great story, all the charactors were well written and when the chips came to the funeral, I had tears in my eyes. great work this story could have been a chips movie

I read this from beginning to end, and I must say that Anderson has some serious issues here. He is in need of some kind of psychological help, because if there is one thing that really spooks me, it's when a cop goes bad, and he went bad. And for him to blame our favorite boys in tan, well, that's not at all good.

Another note... oh how sad. He finally gained control just long enough to write out a plan of action to stop himself from hurting anyone else. What a beautiful thing for the officers to come and carry their fallen comrade to his final resting place. Yea! Steve pulled through! What a beautiful ending!


Now...I'm tapping my foot...patiently waiting!

Oh my, what a hostage situation? I would have never expected Craig's own conscience to finally gain control. What a scene! Excellent writing! Ok, you can't let Steve die, he's got to pull through this one!

Craig is truly evil, to the core. A psycho! Where did you ever come up with this alter-ego thing? Even more interesting, his alter-ego is fighting for control and in a battle with his own conscience. Craig, singing, oh my, he's quite confident, isn't he? Another alter-ego, Revenge... Now there's three entities fighting for control. Can we say, Craig, you've won an all expense paid trip to the looney-bin compliments of the CHP!

Wow, do you have a good grasp of the 'badge points'. OMG, his alter-ego now has a name...Meek. Oh, scary! I can just picture that old green VW van. Did it have a white top? Watch out for the scorned woman! She's gonna get to the bottom of this love thing if it kills her. Ok, now they find Steve's car on fire with him no where in sight. Oh my he's being held hostage. ANGST! Just keep us in suspense won't you?

A proposal! Surprise! And then this accident. What angst! All bow to the Queen of Angst! Another letter! He's definitely ready for the 'padded room.' This is a real heart-wrenching chapter. Good work!

Central is on high alert (and snake patrol as well, LOL!) These letters, they are absolutely terrific. He's a taco shy of a combo plate! (I can just hear Ponch saying this one. LOL!) Great chapter!

I'm glad to see Lindsey and Dr Phillips, coming to grips with there little tet-a-tet. Oh my, here we go again with Craig and his alter-ego. You definitely nailed this bit of the story. Snakes! Yikes, wasn't expecting that one!

Ok, Craig's got something up his sleeve. OMG, he punched Getraer! He's lost it, completely! I love Capt. Anderson's line 'I do a damn fine job of making a fool of myself without anyone's help, least of all his." What a line! Love the Code Silver. What a suspense-filled moment!

I love Craig's alter-ego talking to him... Great piece of work. I can't believe Sgt Gatraer would cover for Craig. That's just not like him to do that. Lindsey's gonna have a nervous breakdown if she doesn't calm down soon. Whoa, did Lindsey ever let Dr. Phillips have it. She unloaded both barrels on him. Good chapter!

My heavens, is Officer Craig a dunce or what. Even someone with no medical training at all would realize you don't attempt to move someone in that condition unless there is some life threatening scenario which would do more harm if he was left there. And especially you don't pull on an accident victims broken leg if you are trying to extracate him. What on Earth was he thinking. Great writing and a chapter filled with intensity.

I had a feeling Craig was going to die. This chapter is so sad! Where did I put my hankie? LOL! I bet the CHIPS had a really tough decision to make, but it was very good of them to go to the funeral in their uniform. Craig redeemed himself with that letter I guess. Glad Lindsey remembered to give it to his father. Let's hope Dr. Phillips changes his bedside manner now that Lindsey made him see the light! LOL. See! They did get therapy! Lindsey is gonna smack Steve back into the ER...He still loves her but he has to give her up to Bruce. Nice ending, with everyone safe, happy and intact.

NO SAH! What a showdown! Good thing GOOD!Craig came out just in time and let Sindy go. Now what's gonna happen to Steve? He's so hurt. ROFLMBO! Dr. Fiona Jones!...HA HA HA HA HA HA!
We finally get the truth out of Lindsey, so she's not IN LOVE with Steve. :( This can be a little complicated later, at least Bruce is there to comfort her. ;)
Oh! What's gonna happen to Craig?

O*M*G! Gin was so right, that does sound like Jeffrey's parent's accident! ROFLOL! Come on Craig - Fight the evil urges! DOH! He didn't, I hope Steve survives all this! Lindsey must feel mighty protected now, all the CHIPS with her. I feel bad for this Sindy, she is brave and Craig is unstoppable. Now Lindsey and Bruce are going out there something big is gonna happen!