okay I think my review didnt make a lot of sence because I was so excited about the story haha- I'm trying to say anyways too many stories on this website are just about trite relationships and vulgarity and its really exciting and reffreshing to find a story that focuses on a different form of love. Anyways yeah- I love how beautiful and strong the relationships are between the siblings especially peter and edmund. I think my brain melted when I read this story because reading my review I was just like wtf did I write? that doesnt even make sence haha. :P

This story was so amazing. What I love about these two is their unwavering loyalty to one another and I think you portray that perfectly. what I really adore about this story is that there isnt any sort of physical expression of thier love beyond brotherly- because this story in particular is about the purity and intensity of love that two people have for eachother and sex doesnt always have to be included in that. Believe me the story was successfully intense and heated and just plain beautiful.

*GASP*
I didn't cry in this chapter! Though I did come awfully close...
Amazing!!

Do I need to even bother mentioning that I cried AGAIN?
I love Caspian's being brought in to the family: "Is this what being an older brother feels like?"
Oh, poor Ed.

And the crying begins again.
Oh goodness, their love for each other is just so deep! You're doing wonderful.
I wish I had tissues right now...

Crying again.
Why must your stories be so emotionally messy yet so wonderful!!??

Oh this chapter made me cry so bad. I wish I had siblings like that. Sadly I'm an only child. haha I'm still crying from that wonderful, heart-filling chapter. Wonderful work!

*breath catches* *eyes mist* BAWL! I loved this! *sobsob* I can't say anymore! BAWL!

I've given up asking you not to be brilliant.

I can't believe that I haven't read this before. I really, really love their bromance, and putting bits of Caspian in really made it more interesting.

Your writing style is really fit for this story, and you characterize Edmund in his point of view real well.

Thanks.

...it really wasn't that angsty. it was sweet. and a tad overdone in some spots. and i don't think caspian would have stayed when peter entered the room after ed's nightmare.

but, really? loved it xD

keep writing!

i love this story. it's a bit odd in place; they'd seem like religious fanatics if not for the fact that aslan is truly real and there and they physically know him as a friend.

This is unbelievably cute! I'm so glad my sister, UnSeriousSirius, directed me to your profile page, and to this story, because it was AMAZING! It made me want to cry at some parts!

A beautiful story. You are such a talented writer...I can't even begin to describe how much your words always move me. Truly well done. ^^

Hahh...I feel good now, thanks^^
very nice scenes and a good stile, but I'm not sure how you meant it - it sounds like brotherly love, but it definitely doesn't feel like it!