Awesome, another brilliant chapter. You're still walking the narrow line of in-character-ness perfectly or at least I think so. However...please, please space the text out a little, it's early in the morning/late at night and you're hurting my eyes.

Love this chapter its going great keep up the good work.

Poor Bentley, getting shouted at by an angry Carmelita can't be a fun experience. Also, loved the Murray scene, it was very funny!

Oh, I wonder how Bentley is gonna get out of this? Please update soon!

This is really great so far! Very interesting, indeed. I'll be checking for your next update, so please update as quick as you can!