AHAHA, this is amazing! I was hooked from the first sentance! Good job :)

I loved the story, it was well planned and the way you describe scenes and feelings is just to fall in love~ <3

Thank you for letting me enjoy such nice story =D

~loony~

Alrightie >__> lol. Anyways! Loved the fic. In the first chapter, I though you went a little overboard when describing things, but you toned it down in the following chapters so it all ended up okay ^-^ hehe
hope you have a good day! Ja ne~

I wonder what flavor Axel's condoms are. x]
And his thoughts about Roxas's toes were so funny!

An afterlife fic! I really, really love these. <:] I like how you put them in a office. :D

So I just wanted to pause in my reading of this story to tell you this is awesome. And I'm pretty stoked that there are so many chapters of this. Cause this is an extremely entertaining and engrossing read.


:]


Thanks for being awesome.

This was such a nice read :)

aw this was so good! i'm so happy i stumbled upon this, even if it was just as it finished. great great story! i absolutely loved it! <3

ha ha, i love this story! i can't believe how many more chapters i have left to read! but i'm thoroughly excited about it. :3 yay, i love afterlife fics! and yours is brilliant. can't wait to read more, but alas, for now i must depart.

It's... It's all over? :( Well, that's understandable, and it was a damn good ending! I'm just sad to see it go, I guess...

Roxas' past was a bit shocking, but I always kind of wondered if he knew Sora and Riku previously... It's so sad all the shit he had to go through. Poor thing! Gah I'm so glad he ran into Axel that day!

Thank you for writing such a wonderful story! You're amazing, as is Just Business!

-Savvy ♥

OMG! I've loved Just Business so far! Keep writing! I want to know what happens when Dem remembers... plus, Roxas and Axel are such a smexy couple!

NO!
IT'S OVER?!
ah i'm so sad now
although, fantastic job!
i love it so much XDD
keep writing awesome stories, please!
X3
<3

the stupid thing is being retarded.

... D:;

-is speechless-

And you're going to start updating your fiction Press! Dear LOrd, I need to find you again!

...0_0
HOLY SHIT THIS WAS THE BEST IDEA EVER~! >A<
The eyes were wrong, the heat was strange, the hair was different ♥
;_; holy crap haha this is so good oh man~♥
I can totally see where like...Roxas would think it was Riku haha
goodness have I ever told you i love you~ *flail*
To be used… that was what he thought his purpose had been.
how sad~!
OHOHOHHOHHOOH haha
Sora stepped out beyond the threshold to stand protectively in front of him aw~ that's kinda cute hahaha I love the description of Sora's expression haha
WAAH THE END WAS AMZAING HOLY CRAP I LOVE YOU SO MUCH~! *rollsaround* oh man

Now what you should do is like...make a little second one of Dem and Zexion hahahah

That was a beautiful end to a beautiful story. Thank you, and I hope your original stories go well.