| Reviews for The Wedding |
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Ace5492 1/30/12 . chapter 1Wonderful! |
Kittykatgurl21 1/30/10 . chapter 1ok no offense but you wrote it kind of weird. some feedback is that you should make it a mroe romantic scene for when vince asks holly to marry him |
runswiththepack13 12/16/09 . chapter 1cool story upate soon!1 |
Thea Cullen 10/8/09 . chapter 1Good job. What I like about you is my favorite show. Everything was great, I just have one suggestion, (you don't have to listen to it, im new in the writeing buisness,2 stories)I don't really think it's Holly's personality to have a baby. Ususally when your writing a fan-fiction you should key of the persons personality, other than that, GREAT JOB. COUNTINUE! |
Velosarahptor 2/2/09 . chapter 1aw! sweet, and funny! |
Daisy190 6/21/08 . chapter 1soo cute ) |
pinkbeauty813 5/21/08 . chapter 1I love this story It rocks |