Nice

foreplay is what makes lemons good. very nice job.

"Next, he began running the tip of his tongue along the skin..."
i think the sentence is better off without that word "next".
it sounded like a step by step procedure in a manual...
but nice work all in all!
thumbs up!
=)

AWESOME!!

I really don't know why ppl have problems with lemon
This was just great!

im a foreplay lover too so its all good :P thanks for the story!!

It's cool~! ;D
Nobody has ever written a Lemon for a long time now XD

keep on writing great stories~! :D

Well done, this was a very good ShikaXTema one shot. I think we need more ShikaXTema stories on here, hehehehehe good work.

A good one-shot. A bit short, but well written and the romance was believable. Keep up the great work.

Foreplay lover *LAUGHS* Yeah I can agree with you, it seem's like the most enjoyable part of the whole thing.