|Reviews for Harry Potter of Atlantis|
| Primus2021 8/31/12 . chapter 5
| getlostD91 8/22/12 . chapter 4
dumbles gives him the stone what the hell. i could understand harry pulling some slight of hand and hiding the stone whilst saying it was destroyed or even better dumbles not showing up but harry being given the stone is just ridiculous its a stone that grants immortality that voldemort himself is trying to steal and instead of protecting or hiding it dumbles gives it to a 11 year old kid who regardless of who it is shouldnt be trusted to use it wisely or protect it, not to mentions its the flammels stone not dumbles so he can give it away anyway
| Guest 8/9/12 . chapter 7
what is the title of the new story?
| Olaf74 2/23/12 . chapter 7
Please continue your stories!
| gender-bender-lover-101 6/22/11 . chapter 2
Okay first off totally disregard my last review because you make some valled points and all and if you can make herniome less bossy and pushy that i thinknthis will work out great!
| gender-bender-lover-101 6/22/11 . chapter 1
Heriome is smart but not that smart and i love the idea but i dont like granger as whole she in charscter is to ummmmmm what word to pushy... and shecsnt posibly be that smart because harry gad the disk of knowelege and all its just im not sure you can make it work out well, thoufh if you do i willbe sooooo fraggin amazed
| UltimateFanJob123 - Beta 27 6/7/11 . chapter 2
I noticed a tiny mistake after Harry enters his trunk. You put Astiras portus as the name for Stargate in Ancient/Alteran. However, it's proper name is "Astria Porta". This is due to the difference between Latin, which is the one you've given it, and Alteran, which phonetically sounds like a seamless blend of Ancient Greek and Ancient Latin. They sound the same, but each has different meanings for similar words.
| ShAdUwReAdEr 10/20/10 . chapter 1
ok i loved the way the story starts but come on 300 IQ and on top off that hermione has the same that is just not right.
i think this chapter was ok but that is just my opinion and i cant decide for you how too write so great job
| Eien Samsara 10/31/09 . chapter 7
i liked this story is their a way for me to take the 1st one not the new on
| lonestarwanderer 9/4/09 . chapter 7
Are there any updates or new chapters listed on Fanfic or any other website.
| harrylover101 6/3/09 . chapter 7
well please incorporate some of the resources from this one in your rewrite please cus honestly i saw no problems with this and it has many brilliant pieces of material
| Oxymironic 3/25/09 . chapter 1
| Olaf74 2/25/09 . chapter 3
I'm lost of words. Your Story is more than Fantastic. Please continue it as soon as possible.
| af-zero 11/29/08 . chapter 1
"...he made quick friends with a girl named Hermione Granger, who was just as smart as he.
Before they both reached the age of 10, they had graduated high school, went to college, and earned PHD’s in various subjects.
Harry had degrees in multiple fields of physics, while Hermione got degrees in Aeronautical engineering.
After wards, since they were too young to get jobs, they decided to do other things for fun, such as becoming fluent in multiple languages.
They both became fluent in Latin, old Latin, Old English, Russian, German, French, Spanish, Italian, Arabic, Egyptian, and a Varity of others."
There are problems with this. Please try to make this at least slightly more believable, Hermione doesn't have access to the ancient repository of knowledge so there is pretty much no way she could get a PhD before the age of ten, much less multiple ones. And as far as Harry goes, while it may be conceivable to gain multiple PhD's due to the mitigating circumstances, they wouldn't all be in Physics. The way I understand it, you get a PhD in a feild, and then past that it's all post-doc work; though it might be conceivable for him to have a PhD in Physics and Maths for instance.
And there's simply no way for them to learn 10 languages while trying to cram 22 years worth of schooling into 6.
| Adaeze Mermaid 10/28/08 . chapter 2
you combined the two very nicely.
i myself am a fan of stargate atlantis. i watch it ever friday night when i can.
i love this story. be sure to check out my first story too.