 IntheSeaofKakera 5/29/10 . chapter 1Woohoo! I just reread this fic and Misa is AWESOMELY CREEPY (like some higurashi/umineko character lol)
sorry it took YEARS for me to finally review:D |
 Classicalitys 10/21/09 . chapter 1Ookiee.
I usually don't read death note fics, but because it's the only way I can talk to you... (since u disabled ur pm or smth..)
and i don't wanna be rude and just type a msg to u w/o reading it.
Overall it's pretty good?
Awwhh they both died xD But at least they're together naos
anyway, my msg to u;; 1st, Thxz for ur review! 2nd, I'm gna re-edit everything and change the plot around (I already changed chapters 1 and 2). and 3rd, IF you still want RyoSaku ideas, yuu can ask mehs :D but either give me ur email or allow pms so I can send it to yuu ._.
NOW BACK to ur storyy.
Actually.. Never mind. No comment.
But I think it's pretty good ) At least it isn't as annoying as some other stories I read where they don't use PROPER english... I mean... How fun is it to read in msn language ._. (No offense if you[or any other] like to read that kind of stuff. It's just MY opinion, and MINE only.. so don't kill me )
AND lastly..
Im gonna be on semi-hiatus XD [[and vote on my poll if you haven't? pl0x?]]
- CxC |
 Danielle aka lilcandy78 1/16/09 . chapter 1 Cool story make more please |
 Silent Scream of Crimson Tears 8/12/08 . chapter 1Wow, so sad but so ROMANTIC! I guess it's true when people say tragedies can bring people together. :) Great Job! :) |
 DontCountMeOut 7/8/08 . chapter 1holy crow! that was so sad!*sob**sob* |
 Strawberry Massacre 7/3/08 . chapter 1That was actually pretty good, you know? :]
The only thing that everyone can do without is the little author notes in the middle of the story. D8 Otherwise, good! |
 someone you don't know 6/18/08 . chapter 1 HI you don't know me but I think your story is good! I'm wondering why you had to make both of them die! WHY?
-anonymous hehe...
btw, For your RYOSAKU story, you should make Ryoma NOT end up with Sakuno because Ryoma is TOO much of a jerk! He DOESN'T DESERVE HER! 0_0 |
 SASU-SAKU4everandalways 6/3/08 . chapter 1HEY! FUJI! This is your ani-buddy UCHIHA
Nice fanfic really romantic and tearful.Don't stop just keeping on writng! |
 LittleGreenTeaCup 6/3/08 . chapter 1AH! IT'S SOO COOL! I LOVE IT I LOVE IT x10
I miss you guys! Your story is soo good! Keep It up! Fuji , |
 Eternal Love of Pain 6/2/08 . chapter 1AW! So romantic !
LOL, this is REALLY GOOD ! |
 meluvpirates 5/26/08 . chapter 1it was so beautiful and loving but i cried so hard when both of them died! |