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James Birdsong 9/17/11 . chapter 7
Good fic
gazcool9269 6/28/11 . chapter 1
i really love your story please continue writing!
PiWrite 12/27/10 . chapter 6
yayyy :)

you updated 8D

it's been like 123456789 years since the last itme you did :D
ocean-stars 12/24/10 . chapter 6
XD LOL. I loved how you just like harassed Koboshi and then said "HAPPY HOLIDAYS!"

xD Ha. well anyway...

this is one of the only good Pita-ten stories that have been really good and incharacter in my opinion, so im definetley expecting more updates -

:/ then again theres Angel Meets Goddess, the story that inspired me to join fanfiction " It hasn't been updated for over a year, now. So I hope you work on it soon, pretty please?
star babe1147 8/12/10 . chapter 5
Aren't they a little to young to be doing that type of stuff i mean hes in 7th and shes in 8th but hey its your story and overall i liked it alot
ocean-stars 7/13/10 . chapter 5
WOOOO this was...steamay...i didnt taste lemon, but i DEFINETLEY got the SCENT! XD
PiWrite 7/11/10 . chapter 5
...

okkkkkkkkkkk

:)

hope you can update soooooon
DN Angel and Cardcaptor Sakura 7/11/10 . chapter 5
Kotarou and Misha really love each other but I wonder if Misha have to go back
ocean-stars 4/25/10 . chapter 2
"Geez, poops. Late much? You'd think someone so obsessed with learning would get her much earlier." Ten-chan smirked. He never could resist the urge to tease him.

TEN-CHAN IS SO IN CHARACTER! XD
ocean-stars 4/25/10 . chapter 1
Kotarou felt his face burn in realization that they had just been kissinng, Misha in his lap, both on his bed. The classic "this isn't what it looks like!" excuse came to mind, but of course it was. Plain as day. Then another realization hit him.

LOVED this part, it made me LMAO! XD
ocean-stars 3/25/10 . chapter 4
wow i liked it!

but sasha was imagining them in...*improper scenorios*...? hm i wonder WHAT...nono just kidding! XD nice humor

i luv this storyima stick to it for a while.

btw, you only have 8 reviews? thats not like you, cuxie! you usually have 50 something by the third chappie! :P
PiWrite 3/21/10 . chapter 4
YOU GET THE PERSONALITYS PERFECTLY

:D

hope you can update more

:)
ocean-stars 10/25/09 . chapter 3
I just read this troy is sso good! pz plz plz update!

here take some orange koolaid 4 ur awesomeness *gives ya ornage koolaid* u no, im actually drinking this stuf rite now. ha, the irony.
Misa-tan 9/13/09 . chapter 3
Fresh with creativity. Good job on this story. Grammer and usage of words are good. For most part in both Klaus and Sasha's case they seem to be staying true to their character. Capturing the personality of a side character is often difficult.

I suspect that the lack of publicy is mainly because less people check the Pita Ten section at this point. At least in comparison to Kamichama Karin.

-Misa-chan
DN Angel and Cardcaptor Sakura 4/19/09 . chapter 3
great story
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