 xxasianicexx 2009-05-11 . chapter 1OMG so hilarious! three years XD love kairei love |
 Phoe.nyxus 2008-12-25 . chapter 1Oh my gosh.. it was so amusing to watch the others squirm!
Completely evil, but entertaining at the same time.
I love it :3 |
 Nekocin 2008-10-31 . chapter 1XD This is really amusing. I love snippets of their life together. They're having fun ALL the way and still not everyone knows about their relationship. Ahahah. Anyway, love this! Good job! |
 Maci-bby. 2008-07-11 . chapter 1omg, omg, omg, omg, I loved it! Ek! Haha, that ending was absolutely PERFECT. haha, it was so cute and sweet adn OMG! I'm on a total yaoi fangirl high right now. Thank you so much for creating this perfect, wonderful story. It's like a stinking gift from God or something! If God wasn't homophobic and all, ya know? Haha, but that's beside the point. I loved the whole idea and the pace and just everything, down to the last detail, was wonderful. You're a great author! Keep it up! :)
^^ Maci |
 Saathi 2008-06-23 . chapter 1Hahahahaha! I loved that ending! I LOLed. And LMAOed. And ROFLed. And possibly even ROFLMAOed. XD
I loved Rei and Kai together. They are teh smex, without being overly flashy. Especially when Rei put on the sexy assassin outfit... [drools] M, Rei the assassin. I wanna be his target, hahaha.
It was really funny in the ninth attempt too, where your "subtly veiled sarcasm" poked fun at all the stories that make Rei dress like a girl. Poor Rei. Haha, but I must admit, I'm a closet fan of the girly!Rei stories. Can't help it...it's the crossdresser in me. XP
There was only one thing in the whole story I felt kinda squicky about...probably cuz I'm so set in my seme/uke ways...but yeah, the part where Kai's pretty much sitting in Rei's lap? That made me kinda uncomfortable...probably because I was thinking, "Wow, it'd be really uncomfortable to have a muscular guy like Kai sitting on your lap." Hahaha, but it was really, really funny anyway. :'D |
 nachtdorn 2008-06-23 . chapter 1 Genius. You are amazing ^^"
“I'm cold,” he said and promptly sneezed.
Oh my god, such subtle cuteness. And i admire the way you've written the whole thing quite subtly. It's damn effective and really enjoyable to read. You definitely haven't gone overboard with the blatantness, which can often make everything too evident and leave nothing to the readers own interpretation.
Mao was perfect, too. And the Rei-Kai relationship, the way you've portrayed is totally perfect, too. Great work and characterization.
Oh, and this comment was pretty genius, too:
“I like your eyes.” |
 Nordic Angel 2008-05-30 . chapter 1I really like the small situations that Kai and Rei comes in, and how their relationship slowly but surely progresses more and more.
Good Job! |
 goldeneyekit 2008-05-27 . chapter 1oh...i wish they got more for their trouble...oh well...^^ |
 Flopples 2008-05-26 . chapter 1This fic really made me smile. I love the situations that Kai and Rei kept getting into and how they interacted with each other. |
 Zed-sama 2008-05-23 . chapter 1This story deserves many more reviews than it currently has.
Very well written and tantalizing in detail, definitely one of the best beyblade fics I have read in a long time. |
 Neko-Jenn 2008-05-22 . chapter 1lovely |
 Anubis-sama 2008-05-22 . chapter 1We think your characterization is great. |
 Iluvbeyblade 2008-05-22 . chapter 1Do you know the basic reason I love this?
MAX!! ^o^
Disregarding the gay!Max wonderfulness, the rest of it's good too. xD *drools at Ray dressed as an asassin*
And the ending was genius. Poor Hils, she tried so hard! *giggle fit*
Loved it. |
 radiopop 2008-05-21 . chapter 1Brilliant. Absolutely brilliant. And creative, too. Did I mention that?
I'm becoming a big fan of your work. I love your writing style and the way you portray Rei and Kai.
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