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| Isabelle 2008-07-13 ch 1,  | abuseFantastic. Poetically written and very strong especially in the dialogue and falling into character. Great job! |
| mysztique 2008-06-17 ch 1, anon. | abusegood one! abit too fast at the end don u think? wel... u said u had a better plan for the finale.. why don u write it out then? i cant wait!~!! |
| prettysparklegirl 2008-05-30 ch 1, | abuseAHAHA! Chuck +Blair?!?! OH wiat- u was serious. JAY KAY!! no.. even if i hate this pairing so much i could bite chucks head off, this was, i must admit, a VERY well writen story. Jsut hoep it doesnt end like this in Season 2. |
| hogwarts-chica-94 2008-05-26 ch 1, | abuseaww i LOVED how you wrote this. amazing. |
| gleechild 2008-05-22 ch 1, | abusewhew. I loved this. It was definitely harsh, to say the least... but I liked the whole thing about Chuck wanting to "slow" things down... I'm glad Blair slept with Nate actually. That was probably my favorite scene of the whole story (especially after the finale). lol. This was definitely intense. I like your new way of centering dialogue but keeping thoughts to the left... though I did get a wee bit confused during the B/N conversation with who was talking. I had to keep going back up and trying to follow. ;) But this is definitley an amazing fic! Great job! I love it! XOXO Sharon! |
| :D 2008-05-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseinteresting :D very creative |
| tessaless 2008-05-21 ch 1, | abuseWoah, that was really intense. I loved the repetition of "tomorrow settle for itself" and I particularly enjoyed your sparse, tell-it-like-it-is style. Well done. |
| Noirreigne 2008-05-21 ch 1, | abuseThis is lovely. :) |
| BN x love 2008-05-21 ch 1, | abuseAMAZING! I don't know, that has to be some of your best work. (but your work is all so good). and ahh I love your new style of writing. It's really cool, and I love how everything just flows with it. this had to be my favorite line: (She makes a decision to force Chuck into switching ‘some more important matter to take care of’ to ‘the Blair-fever and it needs tending to’) haha I loved it. he definitely needs to change that. (: and even though I love Blair and Nate I loved that Blair and Chuck ended up together, it was good for this story. but that doesn't mean I didn't love when Blair and Nate hooked up. that was my highlight of the story. (: good work! |