Wow...this was so emotional. I'm not really one for the Kisuke/Hiyori ship, but this was so well done, I found myself drawn in from the summary alone.

This was just beautiful. Their developing realtionship was so subtle, so well paced. You did an amazing job on this.

~Téa

i just watched the "back in time episodes" and i immediatly searched for some hayura fics and i only found three...yours is well done, thank you so much!

Excellent read...you did a good job of using unusual language and a cool structure to make a good one-shot.

love it

I loved how you developed their relationship so much in a one shot.

very well written!! definately loved the thoughts/feelings you had kisuke think! i totally think that there should be more stories with this pairing!!XD

I'm not good at giving long reviews but I have to say; that was a GREAT and thoughtful piece :D

Hmm very interesting analysis of Urahara. It makes me think about how this affects him now. Oh and this week chapter where he comes a bit too late. Oh man. You can write another fic.

that was very nicely done.
how long did'it take ya to learn all the parts of an arm?

Wow, so many big words. +D
I thought it was really well written, and descriptive.
This would make a awesome story. >_>;

I can't wait until the Vizards and Shinigami all meet up in the manga. ._.

Oh, wow, this
story is so
well-written
and full of
description!
I really
enjoyed
reading it!
Great job!

I loved this! Hiyori is one of my favorite characters (and there's hardly anything starring her on here) so I read anything anyone writes about her, but I think this might be my favorite. I loved how you made her so real and also the dynamic between the two of them. I liked the slow build and subtle realizations on Kisuke's part. I also really liked both the set up for the fic and the flow.

So...to conclude: 'wow' will adequately meet my needs. Great fic.