This... was amazing. Seriously. Nothing else can describe it. It was just so good and I love it. Please write something,like this again! (I'm a hopeless Adam FanGirl xD).

Very lyric! You choose imagery well, picking out small pieces that tell a big story. This flows nicely and is very easy to read.

Wow. Wow. Amazing! Loved the cheery blossom bit and the ending was unexpected. It was really good.