AW! I love Teddy! I think this one might be my favorite... =D
“Then let’s not try that again, shall we?” It's "beariffic," mon amie. Excellent job, per usual!
~Freddie =]

AW
so adorably cute! Tara you're so creative. I wish I could aspire to half of what you do.
As far as stretching it, I agree with you. only good guys (that don't exist anymore except for in our imaginations as shown by) that are a few years over the age of eight exhibit that much self-control and caring for another person. that doesn't mean it was any less undeniably sweet and one of the best things you've written in my opinion.
ta-ta my love,
Megan

THIS IS GREAT!

please continue!

Thank you so much for the dedication! I was so happy when I saw that. =) You make me smile.

I like this one-shot ALOT. However, I think the ages should be switched. It is not in character of a ten-year-old to be that okay with and that forgiving of an offense like that, especially if it was an excellent broomstick that Uncle Harry just gave him. I think that if Teddy was 18 and Victoire was 16 or 17, it would be much more in character and would explain the reaction better, especially since we both know that there was a little something going on between them at the end of the last book. ;]

Keep writing! I can't wait for your next chapter!

Yours,

Wacky

Absolutely. I don't see much Astoria/Draco, and this was lovely.

Great job!
~HGT

really cute, as always.

*reads over the last three lines for the 100th time* aw! just aw! Now because of this chapter, I have a soft spot for Draco! How cute! Cant wait for the next chapter...*ponders over who is usually easily angered...* hmm...
"ARTHUR WEASLEY ARE YOU ENCHANTING ANOTHER MUGGLE INVENTION?!"
Yet he's always forgiven :P if that's not love then I don't know what is
keep up the great work!!
~Ronnie
P.S. oof I feel your pain about computer withdrawal but to have everything missing?! yikes!! Poor George...

How cute! It's rather ironic that this is the next pairing you wrote about since I recently started reading Draco/Asteria Greengrass myself.

Which brings me to my one criticism. It's Asteria - with an e. Have you seen the family tree on JKR's website? It's definitely an e in there. Everyone else has it wrong. =)

I'm trying to hate it because of the pairing, but I can't! I never knew you shipped D/A though. Anywho, as you know since your sitting, what, five feet away, the ending made me go "AW!" Fantabulous job, Georgie. I might start reading this pairing now.

~Waiting for the next chapter,
Freddie Fish

Your writing is really good and I’m enjoying this story immensely.

For further writing, you may be interested in this site: /sapienti_university_of_magic It's a role playing site based on the Harry Potter world.

Either way, good luck with your writing and I look forward to reading more.

Melora Brockert, SUM student

:]
i've always secretly loved draco.
and openly loved your writing. :]

Ops,

The site is

/sapienti_university_of_magic

For further writing, you may be interested in this site: /sapienti_university_of_magic It's a role playing site based on the Harry Potter world.

Either way, good luck with your writing and I look forward to reading more.

Melora Brockert, SUM student

These are such beautiful oneshots! And I love the chapter titles from 1 Corinthians 13 - they are very inspiring to me.

Are you going to write more? Please do!

Wackyy

aw... i guess u were going for the fact that her family was rude and ted wasnt?