Imagine my surprise when I found that the oldest story with Red as a character was written by you.

This was good. A simple concept taken to emotional extremes.

And too bad for Articuno that Red is immune to icy hells.

This was well thought out and well written. I never thought of the games that way and I've been playing them since Blue and Red first came to the US.

Nice, but Red seems like the guy to love his pokemon

Yikes, now I know what my Arceus, Giratina, Dialga, and Palkia are thinking. Very depressing how Red broke the mighty Charizard. Although the description of "slave master" is a bit much, It does sound accurate.

On a random note about your rant at the beginning: Sucks I know, but get over it.

Wow... I would NEVER have thought of it that way... And are you saying... That Red used a GAMESHARK? I would never use gameshark on a pokemon game! Anyway, that Articuno is MAD! Seems like it would be thinking along the same lines as the pokemon in "Just You Wait".

Once again, another brilliant food for thought. I really liked the cheating reference.

i like these.

Wow, this one made me think for a long time, i read it about two months ago and forgot about it, glad i found it again.

I just read this to my brother (cynical person, really) and he pretty much disagree's with all of it, we got in a huge arguement, and he thinks anyone who writes from a pokemon's point of view has problems.

Cool I was just recently thinking about how we care less about our pokemon than they do in the show. Its a game just so long as they do not all faint we dont care if the rest do. except maby we want them to gain points/levels

Wow very dark. You should try prozac.

neat story but now i won't be able to get a badge a fell the same way again for a while *sniff*

I suppose all things considered it's a good story. But I agree with Alex, badges aren't tools, but signs of respect. And I'm sure that not all pokemon trainers in the game are like that.

I, personaly, will stand in a grassy feild or the PK Center for hours with the gb running, pictures of my pokemon at play and rest going through my head. No, I'm not exagerating.

Wow... {Hugs her own Pokemon from her Blue and Gold versions} Level 5 Articuno caught in Pallet Town? Yikes... Red must think he is God or something.

Very dark, and this story makes me really think... I love this fanfic...

"This was our world. Let it be so again. Leave us in peace, Pretender, and go play elsewhere." -Articuno {2BA Master}

I'm never playing Pokemon again, no that I know the true purpose of badges. That pathetic human being used a GAMESHARK on a Pokemon game! How low can you get...

Wow! You certainly think about Pokemon alot! I do agree with you about Pokemon abuse but then, in a way I see it diffrently cause none of my Pokemon ever disobeyed me and I took a whole bunch of trips to the Pokemon center and stuff.