 fouloldron 2009-03-03 . chapter 1Beautifully written. If you were willing Id love to see more by this pair in such a style. Perhaps such letters become habit for Roy when Ed is gone. When he's in the other reality Roy'd probably manage an entire book.
Thanks for posting, and feel free to ignore any comments you don't like, Ronnie.:) |
 kikyo-killer2.0 2008-07-02 . chapter 1wow Roy is so true when he is drunk. could you make ed write a letter or something. |
 fiona868 2008-06-19 . chapter 1Aww! So cute! Why am I having a feeling that Ed gets to read this? I'm giggling and grinning here like a fool. I'm Roy/Ed shipper, too, but I hide it. That's why I read this. I just love the way Roy drools after Ed.
Thank you for this fabulous fic. Loved it. |
 Alissa Hartman 2008-06-17 . chapter 1This was pretty cute, and rather clean, considering Roy's state.
Although, I would like to oppose the Flame Alchemist on one thing; I happen to think Ed takes after his father. Actually, when I first saw Ed in the movie, I kind of flipped because he looked so much like Hohenhiem.
Great job! |
 PaperWolf27 2008-06-11 . chapter 1Normally, I'm not a huge fan of yaoi or shonen-ai, but this is a very well written piece. Very nice descriptions. It also struck me as funny for some reason, so I apologize if that wasn't the angle you were attempting to take here.
It would be kind of interesting if Ed "accidentally" found this letter and then wrote a similar one about Roy. Actually, scratch that. It would be FREAKING ADORABLE. |
 ketsuekilover 2008-05-26 . chapter 1 that was good and somewhat scary (sweatdrop). but awsome nevertheless. ^_^ |
 xfacexthisx 2008-05-23 . chapter 1This story is really cute. Roy goes into so much detail; I like it. =)
Yay me!
Hmm. You could do a second chapter for this, if you want. I'd recommend that either Ed find the letter or Roy could make a fool of himself. Maybe he'd be hungover and starts rambling stupid stuff.
Ed: What are you looking at?
Roy: Hehehehe...glass chin.
Ed: Excuse me??
Roy: Shut up, meaty thighs.
Haha.
Of course, the second suggestion might be an insult to this story. After all, the first chapter is well-written and rather poetic. If Roy had a hangover and made a fool of himself, it might come off as too light-hearted and humorous, which might take credit away from the first chapter. |
 Songfic Misstress 2008-05-22 . chapter 1awesome! |
 QuitexSoul 2008-05-22 . chapter 1wow that was really good?
maybe you could write another chapter/story about Ed's reaction if he were to find the letter? -pouts cutely- pretty please?
anyways good job on the story!
XD |
 HisokaYukiko 2008-05-22 . chapter 1Wow... This was so beautiful and poetic... You must have really worked hard on this. Maybe you can add a second chapter where Ed finds the letter. |
 Oriminally 2008-05-22 . chapter 1XD meatey!
I loved that description!
This was a wonderful read and a wonderful find!
I can't wait till you update 'It's Not Wrong'
Hopefully the next chapter shall be as pleasing as this! ^.^
Have a nice day~
♥Riyo |