I really really liked this. The way you showed Hitsugaya's thoughts on Karin and how you kept her in character the WHOLE TIME was crazy. I've read so many Hitsukarin stories where the writer diminishes Karin's spunk and anti-dress-ness-ness (don't care if it's not a word I'm gonna roll with it anyway) to make her on the girly side. She is Karin; he is Hitsugaya, and that's that. Keep writing!

Great HitsuKarin!
Amazing work as usual.

I must say, this is the first time i have read a fic in this style of writing.
It's so poetic but not quite XD
Everything is so subtle and characters storyline weaves in with eachother it's like i'm reading a modern story by hans christian anderson(well at least i feel that way).XD
love this fic.

I LIKED THIS HITSUXKARIN FIC. ALOT. =D

I don't know how to describe this, but I guess you could say you left me pretty much speechless at the end of your fic. It's going onto my favorites - if that's enough to mention how lovely and enjoyable this fic has been for me. =D

Goodness me, that was INCREDIBLE! I loved it!

Very interesting. I like Hitsugaya's inner debate.

It is nice to see someone actually put effort into doing Karin's character some justice. More than half to the time the only thing recognizable about Karin in some fan-fictions is her name. In all this was pretty good, nice job.

your story was really poetic and all but, It wasn't very funny even though you put humor/romance. so on a scale of one to ten ...:
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I give you a 6

Nice story, I really liked the way you portrayed both of them.