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ArmsAkimbo
2009-12-25 . chapter 18
I really like this and would love to see more chapters someday.
Visitkarte
2009-06-02 . chapter 18
I loved this fic, but I somehow miss the nice finish... Would you consider finishing it if I beg nicely?

*Puppydogeyes*
Ming1
2009-04-26 . chapter 18
I have just discovered this story. It's really good. I'm so hooked. Thank you for much for writing and sharing.
Aquarius Seth
2008-12-10 . chapter 18
So is chapter 19 in the works?
bmax
2008-09-29 . chapter 18
Great chapter and I really enjoyed how you transitioned back and forth between House and Wilson.

House doing what he does best, self medicating. It's a little role reversal here with House telling Wilson what's best for him. Feeding Wilson a bit of his own medicine.

Okay, this review makes no sense. In simple terms: I liked it!
Benj
2008-09-25 . chapter 18
Adoring this fic and 'Days' is just sublime, loving the pace and rhythm, perfect! Cheers Benj
MadeOfStars
2008-09-25 . chapter 18
Nice change of pace. I liked the changing POV and the way you sped things up for them. I also found the meeting between House and Wilson believable. Great work.
Fanny
2008-09-24 . chapter 18
Love this story.
I really liked how you wrote in this chapter, House and Wilson every second paragraph (or something like that).
Spectral Scribe
2008-09-23 . chapter 18
Wow, suddenly I feel as though this could very easily slip seamlessly into the show's actual canon timeline of events between Wilson's Heart and Dying Changes Everything. Cool!

This chapter blew me away because of your technique and skillful hand at writing. It would be SO EASY to screw up the whole following House and Wilson at the same time thing. I mean, jumping back and forth between two characters is like walking a tightrope, and it would be only too easy to make it confusing or not make sense. But you handled it expertly, and I simply love the comparison and contrast of their actions. Wilson stops drinking; House starts. They both eat the same pizza. Really nice details. Plus, it was like double the main pain, a one-two punch of simultaneous angst. I like.

Anyway, I really like that House assumes that because he's managed to move on to other things, Wilson must have moved on as well. Very House-like. Of course, he's obviously not okay yet--solving a case is just a temporary solution to distract him--and in this I see us slowly moving toward present canon. Again, nicely done!
Edwina B. Karch
2008-09-22 . chapter 17
wonderful story, House and Wilson have issues I hope you can work out.
PerfectPride
2008-09-22 . chapter 17
Hahaha, I love the interaction between House and Kutner in this. The angst in the fic is good, but it's nice to read some amusing interaction too. Keep up the good work!
MadeOfStars
2008-09-22 . chapter 17
Top notch, yet again... I really enjoy reading this story.
lhoma320
2008-09-22 . chapter 17
OMG! Another fantastic update! Gosh, I die waiting for your updates and then when an update comes I practically squeal with delight and then just to make sure you haven't posted in the time it took me to read I look to make sure you haven't updated again. I think I have an addiction! :D

I loved the update on House. Loved this line "he’s a tightly coiled spring". The line just exudes anxiety. I especially loved Cuddy reprimanding him for yelling at the nurses. God, I loved this line “You’ll stop yelling at the nurses?” and the way she says it more then once.

I thought him trying to take a walk and getting immediately dizzy was a nice touch. The best was having a nurse come to his rescue, made him sit and pushed his head down. That turned me inside out. :D

Then the part about Wilson was so great! I can't believe you can go from one to the other without skipping a beat and have the same amount of angst. Him drinking straight vodka and slurring his words and talking to Amber killed me. I especially got choked up with him telling her how small the funeral was and how no one knew her. “Because if they’d known you, it would’ve been different.” So sad.

Can't wait for an update. :D
bmax
2008-09-22 . chapter 17
I don't know who to feel worse for: House or Wilson. They both seem to be suffering with their own inner demons.
Great job as usual and look forward to more. I'm so happy you decided to continue this story.
Namaste
2008-09-22 . chapter 17
No one has anywhere to go for relief here, do they? It seems right (and of course canon now tells us as much), but it's also hard to see Wilson with no one but Amber's ghost or memory that he's willing to open up to, House with nothing but anger and misery and of course the fellows and Cuddy without even anyone to notice their attempts to do the right thing.
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