 Clorith 2008-06-20 . chapter 1Lovely! I'm glad Aerith read the letter, even though Cloud didn't know she did. Which is very /Cloud/, actually. *pats my poor aching heart* Oh and sorry I haven't been at CxA! Was this for one of the themes? Exams + David Cook + Long Graduation Trip = AWOL. I just got back not too long ago, actually! Please write more for my Cleris heart! |
 CaliforniaBabeWV 2008-06-13 . chapter 1Such a beautiful fanfiction.You made it perfectly !
"I loved you best" ,was even better,It was a really romantic line.
please make more! |
 Lutearina 2008-05-25 . chapter 1AHH, ALANTIE.
I love your beautiful words - they flow so perfectly. It's definitely your unique style, and I treasure every chance I get to read it. :)
This is quite possibly my favorite fic of yours - the meaning, the inflections, the wonderfully structured sentences - there's not a single word or action out of place. Everyone's in character, every line's its own prose, everything's beautiful.
When I read one of your awe-inspiring stories, I have only one thing to say:
WOW. D:
[And, of course, "AW". But that's a given. ;)]
ILU! |
 Aerith-Heartilly13 2008-05-23 . chapter 1Sweet and salty- I mean sad! (Sorry, haven't eaten yet.) :)
Anywho, love Hamlet, those lines, and most importantly- Cloud/Aerith (as you well know)
Keep on writing great stuff! |
 Lydia-hime 2008-05-23 . chapter 1Aww... Cloud can be poetic if he wants to... and especially if he has the right for it. And Aerith definitely was perfect for that. I just wish he would have presented her that letter! It's so unfair that she dies... so much he could have done. And now I wish that she would have read it.
At least, I'm pretty that's what I got out of this was that she didn't read it right? If I'm wrong, then I'd be a lot happier. Haha.
Great job, once again... your Cloriths rock my socks!! |
 AerithGast88 2008-05-22 . chapter 1Oh that was so sad and beautiful at the same time!! |
 Queen Egg 79 2008-05-22 . chapter 1T.T
So good! I cried! I HAD to review! *still crying*
Such descriptive language! Keep up the good work!
~Queenie
P.S- psst! Don't tell anyone I cried *glances about* |
 Kaleta 2008-05-22 . chapter 1Oh how beautiful! :3 i love this story! =D Poor Cloud, didn't know aerith read the letter ;-; Thats the kind of thing that pulls on your heartstrings! D; |