Very nice

Excellent, excellent work.

The way you've captured the essence of these two characters and their relationship with one another was very lovely and profound. I enjoyed reading this immensely =]

Perfect.
I enjoyed reading it so much, and the whole theme throughout this was amazing. It matched the setting very well, and the last couple of lines were beautiful. A very poetic feel.

Angst... So sad... Personally, the story was fantastic. It's not your typical story full of fluff and romance. C.C. and Lelouch were not out of character, which I'm so glad. The concept of mortals and immortals is well-portrayed here. Immortality is a gift and a curse at the same time. And mortals lived to die someday. I like the lines very well here. Great job.

Beautiful and deep. I was drawn into this. My favorite would be the gods and ocean metaphors. ^^ Great job!

You have GOT to be kidding me. Really. tell me this is a joke and you are going to continue this dazzeling, well written piece that the word "fanfiction" fails to describe. IT IS TOO AMAZING!

Very well written. I loved the poetic flow of the piece. The emotions and thoughts even the actions were beautifully portrayed. I hope to see more from you.

Beautiful! Bravo! That was amazing! Artfully written. And I love how you portrayed them, and I adored the how to kill a god part. Keep writing, love. :D

*fangirling in unisson*

Kiki is squeeing, and Nilie is melting. This was deep, poetic and simply beautiful. Masterfully written, in a lovely sublte way you managed to picture the characters' emotions perfectly. C.C thoughts made Kiki's eyes go watery while Nilie is drowning in her own tears. Seen as it's also a C.CxLelouch, all our brains can come up with to describe it is... this is a very pretty fic.
Thank You, hoping to read more Code Geass fics from you soon.
Nilie and Kiki