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Angel.Alyce 2/11/09 . chapter 4
Great story!

That classroom scene was really funny. You should have Yuuki and Zero meet the twins!

Update soon, please!
OceanFae 8/7/08 . chapter 4
Oh, for petes sake. Reviewers wont get upset just cause you have to do some editing! I know I will keep reading...
CoolGlasses 7/11/08 . chapter 3
continue you story please it 's very interesting
SmilingArtist 7/1/08 . chapter 3
This story's really interesting.

Hope you can update soon!
obsessed reader 6/19/08 . chapter 3
can we say LOVED IT! totally maxed! this was a great chappie! D
destinysings 6/19/08 . chapter 3
LOVE LOVE LOVED IT
KyokoHonda49 6/18/08 . chapter 3
when will people start to find out he is a vampire, my best bet is that Hermione will find out first because she resurches EVERYTHING. so ya, cant wait for umbridge and zero to fight, i think the best time would be when she enhances the rule the ya have to stay a foot or so away from the opposite sex, ya. good luck with that. good job to, and i love you for coming up with this story. i want to see some umbridge torture soon! lol. Update again!

Kathryne
miarath 6/18/08 . chapter 3
Um, thank you for the update even it was a bit short.

Other than that it's nice and I like the character descriptions a lot. please kep writing!
Rubescent Water 6/17/08 . chapter 3
O.o They don't know that Zero is a vampire! I wonder if it would cause a major stir and cause problems.

Continue soon!

:)

Glozinga
Animecherryblossem33 6/17/08 . chapter 1
great fic! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I'm very interested to see what'll happene next!
Katsy17 6/17/08 . chapter 3
awesome :)
OceanFae 6/17/08 . chapter 3
I'm confused, but I'm also addicted. Post agian soon!
OceanFae 6/17/08 . chapter 2
-is about to attack umbrige like a rabid dog- I HATE THAT WOMAN!
KyokoHonda49 6/17/08 . chapter 2
that was good, somthing i am waiting for is umbridge randomly spuing out on zero and zero getting ticked at umbridge or somthing close to that, it would be funny, and i cant wait to see the twins! Update!
Katsy17 6/16/08 . chapter 2
awesome :)
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