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Mistress of Earth
2008-05-27
ch 1,
abusecute.
angelwriter68
2008-05-25
ch 1, anon.
abuseI don't know what you have in store for these two but I'm hoping it's good i wouldn't mind seeing them with a family of their own
BananaPeaceMonkey
2008-05-24
ch 1,
abuseDude!
This fic is hilarious and sad, and yet hilarious all at the same time!
I loved it lots~

I'm guessing the little boy is Denzel and the little girl is Marlene?
Or does it matter?
KarmaBoo
2008-05-22
ch 1,
abuseLOL
Interesting ending... xP
gsk
2008-05-22
ch 1, anon.
abuseHaha! That was actually very entertaining. And it really is true; guys shouldn't have to ask all the time. But in any case, it was enjoyable.
Peachie-Trishie
2008-05-22
ch 1,
abusehaha thats funny!
MyIncentive
2008-05-22
ch 1,
abuseGot a good laugh out of the ending - yep, you definitely can't beat that kind of logic. Good for her. =D
City of Dis
2008-05-22
ch 1,
abuseyou have no idea how right you are...and it ** me off at times...even worse when the girl that likes you doesn't even let you know in the slightest way...they just expect you to know

anyways...this is a good offbeat from the usual fics...even if the ending was a little childish...meh...who am i to judge...it fits.

great job! Keep it up!
Dawn.Fire.Angel
2008-05-22
ch 1,
abuseAw, that's so sweet. (Sniff) I love it! Waa! Sheesh, Cloud, didn't you know that MALES were supposed to ask? Hehe... And I like the last part, when he already said yes when she was asking him to marry her... That sudden crack made me CRACK up. Lol. Love it and love ya! (Not literally, but you know what I mean...)
pangpond
2008-05-22
ch 1,
abuseBravo! Bravo! this is so cute and so sweet ^ v ^ love the endding so much,good job!
DynastyWARRIORS
2008-05-22
ch 1,
abuseLOL. hahaha Go Tifa!!
Love the ending hehe.
*adding to my fave* - 8 years is a bloody long time ,dont u think ?
Anywayz Keep up the gr8 work! (of your story thingy stuff...)
:)
evenstarfictionfan
2008-05-22
ch 1,
abuseLol! Thats one way to get a hubby! Go Tifa!
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