Well, the suspence in this story is of the first class. Very interesting. Keiko the bitch, hehe. Well, let's seen what happens to Yusuke and Hiei, 'cause I am not sure I understand Hiei's behavior so far. Still, the whole style is captivating. I hope you'll update soon!

update soon please. great story.

OMG! I lurve it! the angst and the love! -sighh-

Pwease update soon!

WOAH. What on Earth made Hiei snap like that? I'm curious as to how the confrontation between Yusuke and Hiei will go. Ah the suspense.

Oh wow! You know I think about when I got past the first part with Keiko I was holding my breath wondering what was going to happen.

Also Shizuru is sure scary pregnant! I mean yikes. Kuwabara needs to go around the house some night when she's sleeping and get rid of anything that may even remotely be used as a weapon, just for his safety.

But oh man this chapter was just amazing! It so has me wanting to read more. To know what's really going to happen next. So you have to keep it going.

But this story is just amazing and from the very first chapter I could tell that it was going to be a wonderful read, something that I would die to know what happens each time. And that is exactly how it is turning out. This is an awesome story. I love it!

~Saku~

Wow! Just wow! I originally read this story on adult fanfiction dot net and was thinking to myself, "I really wish there was some way I could put tis story on my alerts list," and then I found it here on regular Fanfiction! I am just so happy because I'd hate to wait for a chapter longer than needed or miss one for that matter.

I love how you have made Hiei sadistic and that you killed Mukuro. I am not Mukuro hater. The reason why I liked that you killed her is because you gave Hiei more motivation by killing her off. I guess what I am trying to say is that I like how you are playing with Hiei's character.

I also enjoy Yusuke's character too. He isn't whiny and pathetic but he still has a heart, he still feels pain and is trying to deal with it instead of throwing a pity party.

To add on to the list of why I like this fanfic, I thoroughly enjoyed how you broke up Yusuke and Keiko, or maybe I should say I liked the reasoning behind what caused Keiko to cheat, thus leading to the break up. I can understand where Keiko is coming from and it doesn't seem like you just thought, "I need to break Yusuke and Keiko up! Hey! Let's make her a lesbian!" or "Let's make her cheat!" It seems like you really thought about the situation.

Anyway, I love this fanfic and I am going to add it to the community I am a staff member of.

what huh? i have no idea what just went on!! boohohoo

Wow, Hei's turned really mean, but that's ok! I wonder how Yusuke will be taking all this, lol. Please update soon! But I do feel sorry for Hei.

I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT! Please, you must update.

...dude. Awesome.

is it hiei! i bet its hiei!

well i am really confused after that but i did love the first chapter. ill wait for youre update.

Ahh that's just mean to leave an ending like that and then poof make us wonder what's going to happen next.

I loved this chapter, it has me wondering for sure what is going on and what will happen next. A great story for sure! And I can't wait to see what happens next. Update as soon as ya can girl! I'll be waiting.

Hei is awsome and is Yusuke going to try and kill himself? NO! Hei save your lover and that bui guy needs to drop dead. Hei is too cool for him. Still a bit confused about what is going on but I eagerly await the next chapter!

Yay! I saw this story on AFF but I don't like to review there because you always have to push the "home" button afterwards! However now that I found this I can review! Yay. Let me just say that this was very well written. I love how you did the dream sequence but I am confused about why Hei would attack...hmm...anyway aside from that I think if anyone in that series would be a lesbian it would be Keiko. Good call. Though I feel sorry for Yusuke maybe his "phantom lover" will make it all better. Please update soon! I love this fic! There are just not enough Hei/Yusuke fics out there! lol.