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| September's Nobara 2008-05-22 ch 1,  | abuseVery nicely done; I really enjoyed the way the characters spoke to each other as if this were a normal, everyday occurrance. Additionally, good work with the text outside of conversation. Great job, all in all! ~September's Nobara. |