thanks so much for this amazing story , i love it very much

it is a good story so far thank you for sharing you wounderful talents with all of us thank you soor it has been so long since i have respond because we had a house fair in feb

I simply love this story :)
great job

Another great story. I hope we get a sequel. I want to see what happens with Josef and Elizabeth and the house and John.

Beautiful chapter, but I'm so confused. It's like we hit a timewarp or something.

What happened to the parents' visit to Colorado?

And why did that creep's brother say, “You never should have gone back to Colorado Springs. You only made things harder on yourself.”? When did he go there in the first place, so that he could have returned?

Sweet, but there wasn't a rap up with her parents.

I like it!

gosh..that was a nerve wracking chapter. But I am so happy you didn't kill their baby.

Can't wait to read more!

I'm so glad she didn't go see that bastard; it wouldn't have gone well. Very happy about the baby and thanks for answering my earlier question.

I'm enjoying this.

I knew it was J.L. This is a cool, well written story. I had almost forgotten about Elizabeth and Josef but I am glad they will be a part of the upcoming events. I wish I had an imagination like you because writing this type of fiction is your gift.

Okay, I'm confused. Way back in the last story this John guy came to Mike's wedding dinner or something and I thought then that he might be the one, but then I thought no, if he was the one, she would have recognized his eyes. So what's up? Why didn't she recognize him that night?

I don't really want the baby to be dead, but I think you should keep it a miscarriage. Then maybe Michaela and Sully can adopt Hanna, and take care of her.

Congratulations, Ashley! Your writing is so excellent, your stories are so incredibly, your ideas brilliant. Don't hope this story ended with the monster on the loose. There are some things to mend, aren't they? What about the baby? And the men arrest that monster, to bring him to trial, -- would be good. But I also could live with Hank's temper out of control and him shooting that monster...

Again: Loved it.

Abigail's death was more than sudden. *yikes* And I really really hope that the doctor has good news for Mike. *wink*