Yaay...

hot topic has gir slippers and piggy slippers too

Eh? Is that it? Besides a kinda weird beggining, and a few errors here and there, THIS STORY WAS AWESOME!

Vonni here.

... What was this about again? xDD

I COMPLETELY forgot, like, it like, disappeared from my mind. All I really remember is a purple haired chick, my cameo, and the purple haired chick digesting her own stomach lining on a long voyage to Irk.

xDD Wat.

yay! they got away! anyway hope you update soon..

i'm gonna point out that you typed 'shape na doclor' instead of shape and color when you were describing foodcourtia.

You need to update soon! XD I wanna see what happens to the smeets! And those little smeets are probably inside her womb (or uterus) but I can't imagine 5 at once. xD Poor Rain is gonna have a relatively large belly when they're fully grown. lmao xD Zim has to be involved more!

that was reall good :D are you going to add another chapter soon?

5... wow!

I thought you were actually going to kill Dax?

Hot Topic has plenty of stuff. I actually have seen GIR slippers. What you'll find depends on whether you go to a store or the internet. ()

I like this story so far... but I don't get how Rain can go on the mission at Dib's house. She would be so far away from Zim... I just don't get it, but I really like the story!

NO!

The smeet cant die!

I love Dax!

NO! POOR DAX. NO! POOR OTHER PEOPLE/IRKENS! I"M SOO CONFUSED! WHO TO WORRY FOR I DONT KNOW! * Blows up, then reasembles* YAYS! NOW I FEEL VETTER!Please update soon please! My sqeedilySpooch will explode! It will, its happened! Plese update, sorry about not updating PAKless, I have writers block.

From you almighty tallest,

Martineau! .

Aw if you were gonna kill Dax (which i knew you were lol) you could have killed him in a more brutal way! lol Smashed into a wall is a bit tame especially for you you sicko! lmao

Haha. Code orange.

WAH! CLIFFIE! EVIL! *Smack*