this, my good writer, is so not complete. heck you even left it on a sort of cliffie! continue it, it's actually a pretty good story!

This was a very interesting chapter. I loved the part about Atem being proud of himself for shaving Yugi. It made me laugh more than it had any right to. I also really enjoyed the explanation of Yugi and Ryou's life together.

And Yugi's skin condition! Finally, it makes sense! But...still dyes his bangs, huh?

Anyway, here's hoping that you get back to this story someday. Even if that day is several years off. :P

Is this really complete? It was very interesting and I enjoyed reading it, but the two chapter didn't seem to have much to do with each other...

That was pretty good. I'd love to read more of it.

...Okay this cannot be the end of it. Must raid your livejournal for more chapters!

Poor Atem. I hope this won't become yaoi?

Aww! I LOVE it! This was beautiful! Thank you for writing it but maybe you could turn it into a chapter fic?

Wow. Just, wow. I, myself, have been an avid reader about Egypt since I was able to pick up books and understand them, so to see a AncientEgypt!depiction that actually works is a very nice feeling. But since I originally found this over at your crosspost to livejournal, I'm wondering if you'll be updating here soon/at all. Keep it up!

This is new and interesting. You had better continue soon!

wow that was very intresting and it sounded so much like atem, i like the fact that you used the facts from real ancient egypt rather than making up some facts. can't wait for the next chapter!

"Before everything went Zorc-shaped in Egypt..." 'Zorc-shaped'? For that alone, this looks promising.

Talk about facing the man in the mirror!