|Reviews for The arrival of a sister|
| El Gringo Loco 8/12/08 . chapter 2
A tantalizing bit of trouble descends upon Palau Palau. How iill Jack and Amelia cope? And will he place ever be the same again. I look forward to reading more and hopefully finding out.
| Nick 7/1/08 . chapter 2
“Well look at it this way Em, it’s a vacation from worrying about all the things I do.”
That was definitely a Jack Stiles line, lol! Great 2nd chapter!
| rylee 6/15/08 . chapter 2
this is one of the best i have read please update soon
| Sprite3 6/8/08 . chapter 1
I hope you plan to update your story eventually :) I can't wait to meet Emily and how her character will clash with Emilia's!
| Nick 5/22/08 . chapter 1
This is great! Especially the dialogue between Jack and Emilia. It's just like on the show! (And how I miss it.) It'll be interesting to see how Emilia deals with Jack and Emily once they meet.
Can't wait for the next update! :-)