A tantalizing bit of trouble descends upon Palau Palau. How iill Jack and Amelia cope? And will he place ever be the same again. I look forward to reading more and hopefully finding out.

“Well look at it this way Em, it’s a vacation from worrying about all the things I do.”

That was definitely a Jack Stiles line, lol! Great 2nd chapter!

this is one of the best i have read please update soon

I hope you plan to update your story eventually :) I can't wait to meet Emily and how her character will clash with Emilia's!

This is great! Especially the dialogue between Jack and Emilia. It's just like on the show! (And how I miss it.) It'll be interesting to see how Emilia deals with Jack and Emily once they meet.

Can't wait for the next update! :-)