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| oONatsuOo 2008-08-10 ch 1,  | abuseO_O Oh- my- Jesus- (I'm, Buddhist, actually) That was SUPER HAWT. X_X I think I just died... o.,o |
| XXXMystery 2008-08-02 ch 1, | abuseThis is really and not as far fetch as others. |
| MilkweedHawthorne 2008-05-24 ch 1, | abuseI can't think of many better things to do than write smut in school. Especially when it's so well done. |
| shonenaiyaoifangirl 2008-05-24 ch 1, | abuseThat was so HOT! I'm bowing for you girl. This was a pretty good start, altough the chapter could've been longer by a few more words. Like, what kind of mission is it that Yuko wants them to do, or is it simly just her plan to get those two togheter? Well, I assume it will show up in later chapters. |
| squeefan 2008-05-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh my gosh! Great smut. Loved it. |
| Night Fox Hiten 2008-05-22 ch 1, | abuseI think you have to make this a multi-chapter story. I mean, all this hype about being out there for a week long mission? Yuuko wouldn't have sent them out there for sex. I'm not too fond of the whole, "we're friends. 'Hey, I like you.' 'Me too. ' Let's have sex immediately!" thing. It's too sudden. It really bugs me. But if you add more to this story, I'll read it, since you did a pretty good job on it so far, regardless of my dislike of the material. Whatever you chose to do, good luck. Have fun. |
| ObsessedReader 2008-05-22 ch 1, anon. | abuselove it love it love it love it! i hope you do write more fanfiction! |