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| yuMeNami 2008-10-04 ch 1, | abusedoumeki is just so sweet..hahaha.. |
| Anyjen 2008-07-26 ch 1, | abuseThat was really, really nice. To tell you the truth, I'd never really stopped to consider how Doumeki felt every time he saw Watanuki dissapear inside Yuuko's shop... you dealt with the topic beautifully. It would make sense that this is where he got his fear of Watanuki 'dissapearing' instead of 'dying'. I'd often wondered at the choice of words, but hadn't made the connection... Very, very good. Really. :) And you kept them very well characterized... Especially Doumeki, and I *know* how hard to write that guy is. |
| Aaidurii 2008-07-01 ch 1, | abusethis is good. hope there is more. =] |
| Toraus 2008-06-21 ch 1, | abuseAw! That was cute. ^-^ I really liked it! |
| Inumaru12 2008-06-07 ch 1, | abusethis is really good. I hope you write more!! |
| Sarahfreak 2008-05-25 ch 1, | abuseWell this was strange but interesting to read...I have to admit I never really gave much thought what Doumeki thought/felt about not being able to follow Watanuki into the store and watching him disappear. This was well written and I enjoyed reading it. Loved it! |
| iloveatem 2008-05-22 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely brilliant. Let's go through all the things that I loved about this piece: 1) The concept. I hadn't thought about it before, but it's extremely intriguing. My admiration of Doumeki has actually increased, which I wasn't aware was possible. 2) Barely ANY grammar/spelling errors! I think I love you. 3) It was fantastically in-character. 4) Overall, very well written. Ah. So that's everything. Thank you for writing this. ^__^ -iloveatem- |
| DeathGodGirl 2008-05-22 ch 1, | abuseNice. :D And I wholeheartedly agree with Doumeki. It must be very disconcerting to watch him just vanish like that. (Well, and I would also have eaten all of Watanuki's cookies. No letting good baking go to waste.) |
| Night Fox Hiten 2008-05-22 ch 1, | abuseAaw. I adored this!! Keep writing; I'll read and review. |